Ada tries to fix things; breaks things in a weird way. Rather than leaning into being a villain, she should just say she was a stupid kid before.

That said, I wonder if it would be more convincing to claim she had a prophetic vision of the ruin that will come to them if things stay the way they are? He seems gullible enough for that.

Ada tries to fix things; breaks things in a weird way. Rather than leaning into being a villain, she should just say she was a stupid kid before.

That said, I wonder if it would be more convincing to claim she had a prophetic vision of the ruin that will come to them if things stay the way they are? He seems gullible enough for that.

Probably better to be straightforward and not open up the possibility he doesn't take the "no" firmly enough. Better not to make it seem like she would be with him, if not for some complication.

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