Good chapter. Still doesn't excuse the ridiculous twist of the previous one, but it at least brought it back a little. I could maybe still be satisfied by how this one ends.
Het and love triangle tag seems unnecessary because this Date guy never have an onscreen active participation in the whole thing. Not a bad one shot, very realistic too. But I'm hoping to see more work in the same vein of quality like The World Exists For You. That's a masterclass.
Yeah, the love triangle tag should be removed. Date & Arisa never even speak to eachother. Can't have a triangle whose three edges don't connect.
Wow, yuri scanlation pace. I'll have to reread this to understand what I just read. I definitely did a double-take when Hato-chan said she was leaving her husband, haha.
Finally got around to reading chapter three, this is actually awesome. I've always been a Mira fan but this is rather distinct from her other work, & I am invested. Still in love with Aluna.
This is fantastic. Dark skin yuri a best.
Is there some nuance to the 'good-for-nothing' line in the original text? I understand what it's getting at but it did seem kind of harsh even in context.