This was cute. I do love me some yearning BoKita.
Dialogue was weird at times; not sure to attribute to translation or the original work. Or maybe that was just me?
Windyfall's quality has dropped off severely as of late, especially whoever is doing the Bocchi stuff they put out. They're typically riddled with errors and very clunky translation. A simple PR pass, not even a translation QC, would do wonders.