I kind of wish they played coy a little more with their hands before proceeding to the H, didn't mind it ending halfway, but any yuri where moles are involved is OKAY!
Yeah it went a little too fast but the last pages were amazing so...loved it! it would have been perfect if it was 2-3 pages longer but it's fine like this.
I think that's more that the editor (who apparently started typesetting recently) worked straight off sadpanda RAWs without any levelling/cleaning, so there's a few dust specs here and there.