This reminds me of pre-anime Maki's character, which was basically Nico's egotism, but focused on her 'hot body' and 'rich beauty', and how 'people should look at her'
I do not like pre-anime Maki's character... at all.
Also Maki in this doujin is a good example of people forcing in mentions of other ships in ship art of a different ship which shares at least one character