pg 1, "When I first become" should be "became"
pg 3, "unsuited to being magical girl." sounds better as "unsuited to being a magical girl", missing "a".
pg 10, "staistics" should be "statistics.
pg 11, "durng lunchtime" should be "during".
pg 15, "melencholy" should be "melancholy".
pg 20, "hert" I think that's "hurt"?
Page 3 (prety -> pretty):
pg 23, "rub aginst me" should be "against"
pg 27, "small and drembling" should be "trembling"
pg 28, "what wiould happen" should be "would"
pg 30, "it the customer's job," should be "is the customer's job"
Page 31 (where -> were):
I'd like to point out to anyone who is uploading the fix to Dynasty Scan that when I fixed the error I went back and made improvements on just about every page and I would appreciate if it was re-uploaded entirely.
I did a sloppy job on Welcome Home Princess Sukuna in general and the newer version simply looks a lot better.