I adore this one. The pacing is great, the panel layout is creative but not confusing, the writing is pretty tight, and I like how she underlines how loving a girl doesn't mean you're like a guy.
It's interesting though, how "I'm so embarrassed" became a sort of ritual phrase in yuri manga, you see it a lot around the same period. It's that weird Japanese link between sexuality and embarrassment, to the point where the embarrassment itself is fetishized. So authors like Chi-Ran can simply use that and the readers already know that there's sex happening.
I agree with pretty much everything here. I have never really understood why you have to be embarrassed by your sex drive/life? I think the Japanese have fetishized this because of the appeal it has for more "aggressive" readers :P
regardless, the part about it being their future memories that they experience is really awesome. very well written, and out of the box thinking for this yuri!
Short continuation http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/dream_trip#1
thanks flips, though I was actually happier with the way the story ended in the original :P
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