Artist from Gamma huh.
I was actually really getting into it, but then it just had too many cliches and cringes... A real shame. I mean, from simple kissing and just jumping to French kiss and sex in one go, the scissoring finish, the one 'inexperienced' person -which isn't necessarily bad but it wasn't executed as well here-, tbh the second half just missed the subtility the first half had. (I would say fast paced, but well this is a one-shot).
But y'know, despite all that I still enjoyed it, especially the first half. And i'll give them kuddos for not including a scene from class where because they've grown so close everyone suspects the gay and throws them away. So yeah some good some bad but overall noice
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