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So, let me get this straight. The main couple in this series is...a cool black-haired girl with a hairband and a "demon" theme, who used to wear her hair in long twin braids, before she later swapped to a "cooler" hairstyle with her hair loose, who has a purple theme color, and is extremely protective of, devoted to, and softened by her beloved...and a bubbly and kindhearted pink-haired magical girl with strong protagonist vibes, with a pink transformation item in the form of a gem in the center of her collarbone, who wears short, high pigtails tied with matching ribbons?

Hmmmmmmm. I wonder where else I've seen that before... Oh well, I suppose it will forever be a mystery. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Did you change your PFP to Homura to make your post more obvious? I don't usually track PFPs but the relevance was obvious here.

No. My icon on this site has been Homura for a long time.

I was naturally aware that the icon would make my joke more obvious, but I think it would've still been obvious even if it was something else. Madoka Magica isn't exactly obscure media, after all.

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...Sorry, I really did just want to let the bit speak for itself, but I seriously can't stop laughing about how derivative this is. The bootleg Homura even has diamond-shaped earrings, and her eyes turn fuchsia when she uses her demon powers... I mean, come ON.

Listen. There's nothing wrong with being inspired by the art you love, and I'm all for artists wearing their influences on their sleeves. That being said, if you're pulling almost entirely from One Source In Particular (as opposed to combining multiple sources), then you might as well just write fanfiction, right? I promise there's nothing wrong with just writing fanfiction.

Anyway, I'll reserve further judgement until more of this gets posted, but until then, I'm very skeptical.

last edited at Jul 9, 2026 10:24AM

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joined Feb 26, 2020

So, let me get this straight. The main couple in this series is...a cool black-haired girl with a hairband and a "demon" theme, who used to wear her hair in long twin braids, before she later swapped to a "cooler" hairstyle with her hair loose, who has a purple theme color, and is extremely protective of, devoted to, and softened by her beloved...and a bubbly and kindhearted pink-haired magical girl with strong protagonist vibes, with a pink transformation item in the form of a gem in the center of her collarbone, who wears short, high pigtails tied with matching ribbons?

Hmmmmmmm. I wonder where else I've seen that before... Oh well, I suppose it will forever be a mystery. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

last edited at Jul 9, 2026 10:04AM

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joined Feb 26, 2020

Ahhhh... Now this is some high quality yuri comfort food.

"Girl with a 'cool' appearance and a non-expressive face who actually has super intense feelings of love and is extremely straightforward and affectionate about how she expresses them" is a great character type.

I also like that the "cool" girl is the boke and the gyaru is the tsukkomi. It's a simple subversion of the kind of dynamic you'd normally expect, but it works really well.

It's fun, it's heartfelt, it's silly, it's sincere. It's great. I want more.

(This is just a random thing, but I also love that the author intermittently depicts background extras shipping the main couple. I cannot deny that the audience-self-insert-himejoshi-peanut-gallery is Just Like Me Fr, lmao.)

vetch
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joined Feb 26, 2020

I think if anything, my main criticism of this author is that she doesn't know how to write actual happiness. Whenever there's a moment during the story where things are supposed to seem truly alright, it just feels incredibly fake, like you're just waiting for the other shoe to drop. And those parts also end up feeling obviously rushed, like you can tell the author doesn't really like writing them, and is just eager to "get back to the good stuff". It makes it a little hard to get invested, because a tragic ending feels utterly inevitable. I don't think this author even knows how to write a truly happy story, so I can't believe she'd write a happy ending for this (and for the record, I know she's written non-angsty manga, but my opinion is that they all feel similarly empty and "off").

I kept struggling to put my finger on what was making this story so unsatisfying and stressful to read when I've enjoyed far messier stories, and now I see that it's this. And that feels weird to me, because I'm keenly aware how much I don't enjoy misery porn. I have an easy time recognizing misery porn in film because I know the visual language they use to accentuate it, but I guess it just doesn't crop up in yuri often enough for me to get a good sense of it. Thank you for sharing.

I actually wasn't quite sure how to articulate what was bothering me about this story either, until the day I made this comment. It had been nagging at me for a while, too.

I'd actually be curious to hear your take on the visual language of misery porn in film, since it's not something I think I'm particularly adept at recognizing, myself. Either way, this is a very nice comment, thank you. I'm delighted to hear that me sharing my thoughts was able to help you better understand your own.

vetch
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This chapter is a pretty blatant parallel to the scene in chapter 4 where Kon is driving while begging Ai not to die, and Ai is telling her to look at the road. In the next chapter, Kon apologizes for it and says that she doesn't want anyone to get hurt. Here, though, Kaede is totally unapologetic about it and later keeps pushing for a double suicide. So it goes.

There's the thematic parallel of Kon telling Ai, "If you die, I'll die, so don't die," and Kaede telling Ai, "I'm going to die, so come with me." Kaede drags Ai along behind her, and Kon chases after Ai.

Sadly, I'm definitely getting the impression that things aren't going to work out for the better this time around. It was a series of coincidences (or fate, if that's how you want to think of it) that brought Kon and Ai together time and time again, and now, coincidence/fate will drive them apart forever.

I think if anything, my main criticism of this author is that she doesn't know how to write actual happiness. Whenever there's a moment during the story where things are supposed to seem truly alright, it just feels incredibly fake, like you're just waiting for the other shoe to drop. And those parts also end up feeling obviously rushed, like you can tell the author doesn't really like writing them, and is just eager to "get back to the good stuff". It makes it a little hard to get invested, because a tragic ending feels utterly inevitable. I don't think this author even knows how to write a truly happy story, so I can't believe she'd write a happy ending for this (and for the record, I know she's written non-angsty manga, but my opinion is that they all feel similarly empty and "off").

I suppose that might be fitting for this particular manga (what with the aforementioned themes of "fate" and "inevitability" and all that), but it just makes it a little hard to get emotionally invested when there's not at least some impression that there might be hope, you know? In this case, the story is just so relentlessly miserable the whole way through that it feels monotonous, like wading through Depression Sludge, so even though it's playing with some genuinely compelling themes, I just end up feeling like, "Ehhhhh..." In short, there's too much darkness and not enough light to balance it out, at least for my tastes. Bit too indulgently angsty.

I also think the author is kind of mishandling Kon as a character. Her core conflict was set up so well in the first chapter, but it has been so underutilized and poorly integrated into the rest of the story since then that it feels practically criminal. For one, the parallel between her and Ai having a shared background of being abused seems ripe for exploration, yet it has gone completely unaddressed, and Kon's abusive mother barely has a presence in the story, in stark contrast to Kaede, whose abuse of Ai is the primary driving force of the plot. Kon has had some wonderful moments of characterization sprinkled throughout the work despite that, and she has the makings of a great protagonist, which is why I feel especially sorry for the misery she will soon experience as everything goes to shit.

Well, those are just my thoughts and predictions, at least. I'd love to have my pessimism proven wrong, so we'll just have to wait and see.

(As an aside, I think the color symbolism is interesting. Kaede is red, while Kon and Ai are both blue. Kaede's desire is to merge with Ai and become one with her, but in actuality, Kaede and Ai are on completely different ends of the color spectrum from each other, whereas Kon and Ai are "gradient neighbors" and are therefore much closer to actually merging with each other... That's how I'm inclined to interpret it, at least.)

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A beautiful illustration of a beautiful scene. I love the tenderness of the atmosphere here, especially when contrasted with the way the red ribbon looks like it's cutting a wound across Homura's throat. Delightful. MadoHomu is the best.

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My heart is going to explode from all the sugar. This manga continues to be an all-time favorite of mine.

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This is most definitely a long shot, but does anyone know if any of this author's other Madoka Magica doujinshi are still available online? I really really loved this one but it doesn't seem like any of their other fanbooks are even available for purchase anymore, never mind translated... I'll pay for the raws if I have to, I just want to read them ;_;

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Lovely and heatfelt as always. Thank you for the TL.

Lovely pfp. Very good taste. ;)

Ahaha, a kindred spirit I see. Right back at you, fellow Devil enjoyer.

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Lovely and heatfelt as always. Thank you for the TL.

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I hope Nmi creates a full series someday. Their works are just banger after banger, I can't get enough of 'em.