shadesofgreymoon posted:

Source of my opinion: I write fantasy fiction and also sometimes help out with QC/editing translated works.

My source. I watched videos by published authors giving their advices and telling you what exposes you as a amateur/fanfiction writer. Apparently "said" is a great invisible word that you're not going to notice, which make it desirable, while replacing it with other words most of the times just make it sounds wonky or something like that.

I understand what you're saying and you should avoid repetition etc. but apparently it doesn't apply in this case and you should only change it sparingly. And yes, just omitting word altogether is a valid solution. I don't entirely agree with it, but apparently that's what people in craft are saying. Or what I heard at least.

MacySan posted:

Like how to write dialogs without repeating the word say all the time

I heard conflicting opinions on that, but apparently you never want to replace word say and use it all the time.

Blastaar posted:

(And absolutely, the comparison with MUL is beyond a loaded one, but the many parallels between the two series also make it a natural one.)

I mean. The sole reason this manga got upload her was because someone in MUL thread mentioned it as a better manga with similar concept and made people interested in checking it, so I think it's natural it would be brought up here.

GendoIkari posted:

Sometimes, I pull so hard

I rip the skin

Sometimes, I pull so hard

I rip it off

https://dynasty-scans.com/forum/topics/5734-suggestions-for-improvement-v3

Lilliwyt posted:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AODnWIirajU Rising of the Shield Sister. Not an Isekai but rather an SAO like. Seem we have two girls as MC so dunno. (For 2020 tho)

Oh nice. It gets a anime. Read a bit of manga. It's pretty hilarious.

Hollows posted:

How are we going to get a massive orgy if our protagonist suffers a leg injury?

You think small. This way they can also get nurse into the action.

Characters confess their feelings.
Manga ends.
Why I'm not surprised.

YagMi6 posted:

This is a questioning tag for this site that specializes yuri. I mean what kinds of shotacon would DS allow and not allow?

Dynasty mainly upload yuri, but isn't yuri only site. It sometimes upload other stuff when it consider it good. So your answer is, the good one.

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Azalel posted:

Hello.
I know it's not much but someone posted this on discord and didn't know what it's from.
https://puu.sh/E4hsC/f4ae6b0977.png

Does anyone know the source?

Art look 100% like Morishima Akiko's. Can't tell you which story though.

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Aikyuu-Chan posted:

I wonder how Kitakami will react about this one.

Will probably be very happy for them.

I'm glad I wrote that, because now I finally understand how that damn thing works. It's a bit complicated to explain, so I might elaborate later, but short version is that because the way chapters are listed on main page and in recently added is identical, I assumed they both were segregated by dates. I never actually checked every new addition to see what date it has, so when I saw all added chapters in Recently Added under 10 August, I assumed they all had the release date of 10 August. So it was purely my mistake.

Ok, since you insist to use scanlation dates, can you at least make Recently Added button consistent? On main page it show you actually recently added works, but if there's more than it can show at once and you click on see more, it will show works using release date as well meaning, the works that were actually showing up on main page, won't be there and instead will show at their appropriate date, so if you add more than 5 chapters at once, you can't click on see more to actually see if there was more, because you have no way of knowing when they were released and where you're supposed to check. It makes it very easy to miss works with older dates if you aren't checking site everyday and even when you do, you can still miss them, because they will never show up on actual main page.

What I'm asking make Recently Added work like on Discord, so you can actually check what was recently added there. I know, you can just use Discord for that, but not everyone use Dynasty Discord.

EDIT/ Looking at it again, both releases on main page and recently added have some more inconsistency.

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Serenata posted:

I thought you guys were discussing the tag masturbation hahahaha

Same xD

KcaT posted:

Is the first season a different pair or something?...a shame there isnt more but ch5 isnt too bad of an ending, lol better than some yuri endings ^_^

Read the very first post in thread.

Jeanne Mathison posted:

(which btw I never read, is it good?)

It's great. One of my all time favorites. Everyone should read it. Also the way it deals with ex is really satisfying, but at the same time feels real. In general it has good balance of romance, comedy and drama.

Polioro posted:

Why this has put that was upload in 2011 when like 2 days ago I couldn't saw it? o.o I don't understand.

Those are release dates, not upload dates. The Recently Added page clearly shows them uploaded yesterday.

But I had read this years ago and I could swear I read it from here. I probably had read it in another site and that's why I'm mistaken, but it's just a little crazy xD

It could be added here before, but removed and now added again but considering Yurikai policy on their scanlations, that's unlikely.

TheLostLight posted:

What the heck? Why they censored the kiss scene three times?

Kisses can be difficult to draw for some. At least, according to what I've heard. Everything is difficult for me to draw, so I'm just speaking from secondhand experience here.

Some authors have really big trouble drawing kissing. Check Nana Yuri or A Room For Two for examples.

OrangePekoe posted:

By all means, continue discussing it if that brings you joy.

https://youtu.be/cYNdUM2gRsg?t=25

Nya-chan posted:

The characters in Tsurezure Biyori are lolis too.

They aren't. Lolis are prepubescent children or younger so 12 yo or less. They're middle/high schoolers, so they're not lolis. They're teens. But because nobody bothers to actually use the word correctly, nowadays people just use it as meaning "anyone below 18", which is wrong.

Jeez. Lolicon tag on dynasty is used to inform that series has lolis in it. It says nothing about them being sexualized or anything. It's pretty much pointless tag, because half the time said lolis aren't even lolis. Either way, they are teens exploring their sexuality. I'm sick of people getting all worked over "sexualization of minors" etc. 99% of dynasty content is illegal, because it's depictions of minors in sexualized ways aka having sex etc. Can we just stop with this crap and focus on enjoying the fucking story? Teens think and can have sex, that doesn't automatically make it sexualized. It's just normal part of life and growing up. Can we stop policing and protecting fucking 2D drawings of fictional people?

BV posted:

6931053th

Did we really have that many, or did you use that number as a figure of speech?

We had that many.

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It's funny, I remembered how there used to be huge debate whatever it's yuri or not and so many people being adamant, it's barely subtext and nothing will ever happen. And now we get few pages of them being adorable and 2 page spread of a kiss.

Gibfady posted:

no love interest (I would've taken het for sure!). So nothing interesting happens.

So story needs romance to be interesting?

EmergentLurker posted:

What's up with the upload dates, they all say they were added back in 2010. How does that work?

Dynasty insist to use the release date of actual scanlation, rather than upload date to the site.

Remy posted:

One thing I don’t get is tho, why so many of these manga involve rape?

Because rape happens irl?