I feel like there should have been a downtime chapter between the last chapter and the final chapter. Going from Madoromi to timeskip we're married and living together epilogue felt really sudden.
It's strange. In any other manga it feels like that Madoromi would have been paired with someone else either through the manga or after the last chapter where she "reached her character development" so now she can grow and yet here that was the end of it all, she remained alone, with her character arc being "Learn that you are a piece of shit and that such an attitude will never get you anywhere in life".
I agree. It feels like there could have been a few more chapters, maybe even an entire extra volume. Still good overall though.
I'm going to sound old for a moment:
Isn't it nice that we're talikng about aYuri manga ending,where they could have wrappedthingsup with a few more chapters.
Instead of staring at an ending with one, or both, leads dead, suddenly straight, or stuck in a loveless marriage?
How far we have come. I also like the angle of a fujyoshi falling in love with a fan artist. Then,that artist realizing her ambition and getting her manga published and serialized. I lovedthat Misumi doesn;t just put up with Ai's extreme fangirl behavior, it part of why she loves her.