Glad Kou-kun got to reconsider, and I'm not at all surprised he broke up with Michael. Good for him! :p

kinda sucks if the break up is actually related to this topic. They didn't out right say it. Man. I just want everyone to be happy.
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I now want the "ending" to this so bad! I know these are real people. Will have to hope my google-fu is up to the challenge.

Yeah. Pretty good. I can see this kind of character getting worked up about an issue like this. Nicely done.

Otsu Hiyori is the best! Well, one of the best. Both of them are so chill about being badmouthed, though, that is not natural for a highschooler...

I could be dead wrong but isn't this a thing in Japanese culture? I was even told it's impolite to to outright say "no." I think that's why blunt characters seem to be seen as odd sometimes in other stories.

I really like this chapter. this seems to be moving along very much how I'd like it too.

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I'm not usually mad at the third wheel per se. And I'm a little surprised I honestly can't seem to sympathize with them more most of the time. Something about their purpose in the story just gets on my nerves. It usually seems like they are solely in the story for corny drama. As a cheap way to get the "don't-sink-my-ship-types" riled up which I'm actually never part of. I don't really ship. I just want a good story.

Though I suppose one of my favorite characters in the world right now get's a lot of her characterization from being a loser in a love triangle even though it happened waaaaaay in the past. so there is that. From the cartoon network show. Steven Universe. character Pearl

And I don't believe people that say this kind of drama is the "only way for the story" to continue or whatever. I've read good ones that left this sort of development out completely. i will do the same when I start writing my own yuri. They probably wont be very good but it won't be for that reason.

But this story does some to wrap up the serious stuff quickly so I'm hoping the same happens here.

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That's rough buddy.

It was alright.

Very appealing characters so far and nice art. How about a whole story? I love werewolves.

I like it. Even if the yuri wasn't overt. Never going to like this cutesy arse art style though.

Hell yes! more fighting game yuri please. Need to start trying to draw my own and not suck at it.

Well. Ok then!
I like where this could be going. Early spoken confirmation of attraction if not down right confessions of love are really what I like best when it comes to this genre. And the one here was ahem. 10/10.

Not bad. Could have been an interesting start to a story.

Ahahaha! That was pretty good.

Dayum! One of the best I've seen of these too. I really love this.

Now that was terrific! So very good. Made my day.

Mortal Komabt announcer voice: "Well done."

Still not even sure If I actually want to continue to read this or just start skipping it when I see that it's been updated. But I'm trying to contribute to the discussion and not be a downer so if you are enjoying this than I'm happy for you.

Feels like a common thing to show how being close to someone you're in love with can be a sort of torture, especially if they aren't even aware of it, but this short does it exceptionally well. And I say this as one who finds fluff annoying more often than not.

Well. Maybe the next actual chapter will find a path that I can get behind.

oh. Ok. Yeah. I get it. It's just . . . ending there just leaves me incredibly indifferent to the whole thing. Were it to continue I might be able to get more invested. As is, I don't think it will be something I will even remember reading.

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as much as I disliked the show, I did kind of like their relationship and always liked this image.

Very good. Seemed to move a little too fast which is probably hard to manage with one shots and that one line of course I was rejected bugs me. Felt like it should have bee said a little differently but overall very nice.

Pretty damn funny. These two are so much fun to watch.

Ok they're ghosts, this is super obvious

And here I was trying to work in a joke about them being vampires since one was literally drinking blood . . .

Yeah. These two were my favorite pair too. Fun picture.

Ending was funny. Sorry famous, rich pop star (who hopefully gets with girls herself). Looking at my friend instead of you. ah that amused me.

Really nice art. Premise was interesting but seems like it might be headed for that graveyard of abandoned yuri stories.

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