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EvilDevil
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pg 6 "used used"

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pg 19, "like the put" -> "like they put"

EvilDevil
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pg 8, "there's a lot of differences to parties with everyone the same gender" -> "with everyone of the same gender"

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 11, "I can't just act like I know understand all on my own." -> "like I now"

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 18, "I naive enough" -> "I'm naive enough"

EvilDevil
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I interpret this dream that Ed is a good role model to look up to.

EvilDevil
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Wait a moment... "Elisha?" Wtf Ed!? What happened with Eri-chan???

Ed-chan no baka!

Does it count if it is a dream version saying it?

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Resort to bribe LOL

I think those are concert tickets.

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

pg 6, "any yet" -> "and yet"

EvilDevil
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pg 15, "said a fate" -> "sad fate"

pg 25, "wanna be taken of" -> "wanna be taken care of"

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

where is the useless lesbian tag?

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joined May 28, 2011

pg 13 has the same sentence in two different speech bubbles.

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at least there is a silver line

https://i.redd.it/jcmx7q6c1vf91.jpg

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the body size in pg 1 is so wrong i cant unsee, I think the heads are a bit big.

last edited at Aug 2, 2022 1:57PM

EvilDevil
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something wrong with page 17

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 26, "propensity to to try" -> "propensity to try"

pg 78, "then I... will no longer any resentment for the sacrifices I am bidden to make."

feels like a word is missing.

last edited at Jun 14, 2022 2:15AM

EvilDevil
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ch 7, pg 73, "they said me they'd" -> "they said they'd"

Yurikosmaller2
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ch 7, pg 419, "who having" -> "who is having"

EvilDevil
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ch 18, pg 14, "When you're the only when" -> "When you're the only one"

EvilDevil
9C2 discussion 03 Apr 04:19
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pg, 27, "there'd by" -> "there'd be"

EvilDevil
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ch57.5 pg 176, "to" -> "too"

EvilDevil
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wait... are any of them real at this point? What is reality?!

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ch 10, pg 2, it says "then you should stay here with me" twice.