It's ok, Riko didn't deserve Haru at the end.

No reaction from the characters even with Ryuuka stark naked?
Can't help but question the sexuality of those girls like that.

Don't think I'll ever manage to see this kind of rough and wild sex all over a house be this romantic again.
This is probably one of those "one of a kind" works.
Just perfect.

Yeah, ended up coming over here because of that other, actually good release with that tag.
This feels like the author wrote a hetero sex scene and decided to put two girls as the characters in the last minute as a joke.
and the fact that there were people considering this the best YURI porn doujin out there makes me want to gouge my eyes out.
In many of those pages as well the author draw it in a way that you would only see the part of it where it's like a girl is being fucked by someone uncertain and the phallic object is transparent, typical stuff on hetero doujins that gives the reader a opportunity to self insert.
Not to mention the times the author forgot to draw some parts of the strap-on as already noted by some.
45-ish pages of strapon fucking.
the things girl can actually do without toys was like 12 pages and basically just foreplay.
And now that I bothered to read the dialogues, there was so much "MAN, I REALLY WISH I WAS A MAN RIGHT NOW" "don't think about it, honey", not to mention all the "doggy-style-fucking feels so amazing" that it's hilarious now.
I don't think this relationship would last too long, next step they would end up finding out they can't have babies because they're not man either!
(Actually, the first mention of how much they wanted to be a man was just a little after the author initially forgot to draw the strap-on, maybe he put that as another joke, because he was basically drawing full on hetero sex for a few pages?)
And the icing on the cake, "The next book I'm planning on releasing isn't likely to be yuri or anything. It's a SERIOUS book."
Holy shit, this author is a genius, he put a punchline in there and spits on everyone's face, and most people didn't even notice it.
All in All, 10/10 joke.

last edited at Dec 4, 2017 7:46AM

chapter 3 isn't full color tho

Screw you negative people. You know what you were getting into and still you complained when you got what was coming.

Not like we could see into the future to know what the author was gonna go for, don't see why blame us.

someone in this has mental illness for sure, I'd wager my bets on it being the author though.

No matter what I hope this doesn't end with Uta and Kaoru together. I just don't feel like they would be good romantically for each other and Uta should move on and find someone that loves her and isn't so dependent on her. Kaoru seems more suited at being a friend/sister than a lover anyway imo.

I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but Kaoru NEEDS someone around her right now, she's obviously traumatized, and considering what just happened I seriously doubt it's going to be the brother.

but the amnesia thing just looks like something people who didn't like this outcome throw in the air out of frustration more than anything.

I did mention the fall she took, those were a lot of stairs, expecting her to come out fine after that is what seems weird to me, and all things considered, having her have amnesia is the thing most convenient for the story right now.

I don't find her detestable, just a pain in the ass IF it's just a misunderstanding and she almost killed herself over something that could've been cleared out if she actually read the phone.

last edited at Nov 12, 2017 10:11PM

Because people love to overreact and try to imagine the worst possible outcome so they could complain some more! The scenario imagined is that during her fall she hits her head and gets amnesia so she falls for Uta or something.

Well, people were imagining the "worst possible outcome" of the husband cheating on her so there's a excuse for Uta to get a chance at her, and that already happened, so expecting another worst possible outcome seems pretty reasonable right now.

I know this might be a misunderstanding, but if it is then Kaoru will just become hateable, she's been a pain in the ass through the story so far.

Also, taking another look at the stairs, did she fall from the very first set? then people should ATLEAST expect amnesia, or otherwise she should be goddamn dead.

Now that I think about it, she was reaching to the phone because supposedly the brother messaged her something, could it be that he was going to tell her he was actually coming home? if that's the case then I hope Kaoru is actually dead.

last edited at Nov 12, 2017 9:32PM

Kuro's "arc" was fine, even interesting, this was just jumping the shark.

the tags on this guy's other works makes me think this will probably take a turn for the worse.

well, this is getting pretty interesting now.

uhhh, thighs vampires aren't that fun anymore now that they are also literal murderers.

wew

So what happened with the "I come from the future" stuff?

Yeah, if you want someone to believe you're their lover from the future, you'd know stuff like that about their life, right?
There's 0 credibility to her now.
Not sure if bad writing or this loophole will be noticed later by the MC.

reimu was a bit too tsundere but it's cute I guess.

twin tail knows it

she just took a bath people, jesus christ.
you don't need to have sex to do that, you know.

for a moment there I thought it was yaoi.

seems like people actually really like this author, I don't understand why though, everything I've read from him/her besides 2DK seems to make a lot of mistakes on the way.
Is 2DK that good?

good for the heart.

huh, so she just got into high school, decide she needs to have sex really hard, then fucks some guy randomly, and then later basically rapes her friend?
wow, selfish doesn't even start to describe it.
kids are something else those days...
Was I supposed to be laughing at that ending?

last edited at Sep 1, 2017 1:17AM

Isn't this one fun? Ruki falls in love with someone and after she breaks up with her boyfriend, Ruki is probably thinking she got a shot to being happy with her, they start (kind of?) going out and then Sacchan, like a bored teenager, just decides to cheat on her just to see how it would feel, and what kind of things someone who prey on woman would do to her in that situation, lovely!
Really can't blame Remi here, like she said, if Sacchan wanted it, she had to initiate and she did.
I liked it, it's realistic in the sense that even if you fall in love with someone that acts and looks pure and innocent, she might surprise you in a good, or terrible way.
And Remi just did what she wanted, neither with Ruki or Sacchan did she do any real mental manipulation or something of the sort, just got them interested and went for it.
She helped out in some cases as well, so it's not like all she did was "betray"(she didn't betray anyone, Sacchan did).

last edited at Aug 27, 2017 1:20PM

Pretty sure she is the one who ask kasumi "are kasumi and achan dating" in the toilet. (More than friends)

It really is, guess she wanted tips.