There's no comments for this? the story and art are nice. ( sorry for my English )

The cuteness... is going to kill me.

that was so cuuuuuute!!! >w<

I haven't read this in so long. It was such a great story.

This is a really lovely little one-shot.

That deadbeat father was only in one scene but it's really enough.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddddddddddddddoooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E! The art makes them look super young, but that just makes it more... you know what I'm going to say!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddddddddddddddoooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E! The art makes them look super young, but that just makes it more... you know what I'm going to say!

"More"... Perverted?

This was a cute one-shot, I personally feel the cutesy art style kind of clashed with the serious mood this manga seemed to try for, but in a way it made it easier to focus on the adorable yuri instead of the assiholic father, so it was kind of a serendipitous happening.