Hmmm....missed this one until now. As an old school Tabletop RPGer (and a fan of White Wolf's Mage: the Ascension RPG), I kinda liked it for what it was: a sex horror story. However, like others, I kind of wonder if Morinaga Milk might not revisit this and flesh things out.The sex didn't bother me (I mean, I love hentai of all kinds so there is that..just nothing with poop or animals, sorry) but it definitely suffers from some rushed plot points. I could almost see this going at least another chapter or three if the story were reorganized in a more straightforward fashion. Its definitely got the diamond-in-the-rough feel of a story that just needs a bit of editing and polish to become a classic.