You know the story was so nonchalant and normal at the beginning that I was about to come into this discussion planning on talking about how "I usually don't read doujins and can't stand them but this one really felt canon almost." But then that sex scene and the rest of it just got so random and stupid and it all just felt like the author got really lazy and stopped trying. I know there was a way to make that scene seem logical but it just wasn't even remotely close to that. I understand that the second half was probably meant to seem kinda silly but it really just reaffirmed my negative feelings about doujins lol.