This wasn't too bad. I stand by what I said about the author needing to tell the story in a way those not into fighters can enjoy.
I disagree with those saying fighters make a bad topic though. It can be done. It just needs to be done a certain way. I wanna give it a shot if I ever get my art and writing skills up! woo!

I'm no fan of cutesy moe art. It's something I put up this in a lot of yuri.The anatomy here was even more disturbing through out. I actually did like the art for the fighters at times.

There were a few interesting quirks revealed along the way. Like one character not liking fireworks because the sound comes at a time different from when you see the flare.

the end result for the rivalry was handled better than I thought it would be.