I love yuri where the receiving partner is clearly every bit as much in love as the active one. A lot of artists don't really communicate that well, but here it definitely is. I love that internal monologue about her beloved longing for her as well in the second story.
i'd like to see a Sakuya/Meiling reversal story, not involving Sakuya turning into a vampire or anything. I can't think of any off the top of my head.