The ending just brought up some horrible Mario memories.

What the lol?!

Reminds me of Yamibou and the potential for yuri is high so I'm going to keep reading this. I really wish the author would continue Voynich Hotel though.

all of this author's weird.

Badass heroine? Check.

I think I've gotten too use to Dowman Sayman's style, I followed this one pretty well.

Totally comprehensible, very cool. The gaydar reading on Ms. Heroine has got to be off-the-charts - all the more reason to look forward to more!

I think I've gotten too use to Dowman Sayman's style, I followed this one pretty well.

Yeah. I'm in the same boat. This was completely comprehensible. That can't be a good sign.

i died at page 10.

-___-" gosh. I LOLed so hard.

Waaaaat? :D

sorry to say this dears but ,WTF did i just read? Me no understand any of it?
Is the pony hair girl a boy?

I'm guessing this is going to be another set of collections by Dowman? Don't get me wrong, I like Dowman's work (especially Oddman 11) but I can't tell if this if going to be one continuous story or not. If it is, it kinda jumped into the middle and some explanations would be loved.

sorry to say this dears but ,WTF did i just read? Me no understand any of it?
Is the pony hair girl a boy?

Nope, that girl with pony-tail is a girl :)

Page 9, third pannel... BRS!!

In fact the ending remind me of the video of BRS in Project Diva... I need a colored page to break this illusion of BRS' parallel world

I get an Inception vibe from this. Could be the random bullet coimg from the sky or the level thing, but either way I'll be following this very closely, would be disappointed if it was just another collection of shorts though :<

Yes dowman sayman XP can't wait for what cea next. My yuri goggles indicate that gay levels are present

Wow, this is great! I basically love all works from Dowman Sayman, and this one also didn't dissapoint. Can't wait for the new chapter. The flying bullet is not a Super Mario reference, is it ^^? http://www.mariowiki.com/images/thumb/f/f7/BulletBillsmg.PNG/200px-BulletBillsmg.PNG

anybody notice the cameo of the elephant man from the manga dreams of an elephant

Totally comprehensible, very cool. The gaydar reading on Ms. Heroine has got to be off-the-charts - all the more reason to look forward to more!

Agreed. A series that Dowman Sayman can go crazy with makes me excited. Especially when he can give it more attention than a regular oneshot.

BTW where's your avatar from?

Very interesting... Must read more xD

Yeah. I'm in the same boat. This was completely comprehensible. That can't be a good sign.

I thought the same thing......still liked it though :)

Agreed. A series that Dowman Sayman can go crazy with makes me excited. Especially when he can give it more attention than a regular oneshot.

BTW where's your avatar from?

From Miss Sunflower!

Specifically, this page in chapter 11.

Woah, original... kinda nonsense, but original!

This was just.....but am looking forward to reading more of this tho.

Smells like Yuri to me