I liked this but it was a bit fast between the confession and having sex. She turned from shy to being assertive too fast and dived into sex way too fast.

"Moderate amounts of sex" one-shots usually have that problem for me, but this especially so. Something about "we just confirmed our feelings are mutual, LET'S GET RIGHT INTO THE FUCKING" is just awkward to me. Wish more of them were about characters who were already going out.

I'm more surprised at how the artist doesn't seem to know what vaginas look like. It's not like there aren't a lot of references out there...

They are all censored with mosaic ^.^

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