A great story, both in the overall sweep of it and in the moments — I'm particularly fond of the bit where Kuroko re-ties Yuri's hair, because she needs that bit of grounding.
I keep reading these doujinshi (and enjoying them) and thinking I should read more than the scattered chapters of the manga that I've seen, but my tolerance for cringe is really pretty damn low — I can barely watch old episodes of The Office without injuring my neck in all the cringing. Ah, well.