I think I laughed throughout most of my reading of this over how gung-ho the rest of the team was about how things were going. Also, these comments here, some of them are flipping gold. This was an interesting read all the same though, not sure how I feel about it one way or the other though.

Asuka you lil dumb-dumb, making your wife wait in agony without you even knowing! XD The story seems a lil bit like rape between 'friends'... but at least they both felt the same way, else it would be a real serious case with one bestie raping her one sided love... XD...... O_o

Best fucking coach ever xD

People saying it's fine are missing what the character says on the last page.

Oh wow
Mira likes rapey stories too much for my tastes, even if it's consensual I'd rather it not feel like a rape

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