Honestly I think "mind break" stuff is usually pretty fun but I don't like how it was used here. I kind of preferred how KitaKawa did this kind of relationship where the sub already had their own reasons to go along with whatever the dom wanted to do, even if they weren't really into it in the same way the dom was initially.
But, I also think a lot of elements in here would've worked better if this was a multichapter work and it had time to cook in the oven? I wasn't particularly sold on any of the emotions or motivations the characters had in this and it made everything feel pretty flat to me.
All the bullying aside, I was kind of disappointed that she kept saying punishment this, punishment that, but we never see her actually doing any punishing.
Right? Feels like all of the fun stuff got glazed over.
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