This felt like it could have been interesting but seriously fell flat. The choking during sex seemed really abrupt (although on a reread I noticed that Tsukushi does have finger marks on her neck during the sex panels, so it is foreshadowed but definitely could have had better setup).
Honestly, I expected Tsukushi to overdose (purposefully or accidentally) and Sakura to go into a self-loathing spiral, blaming herself for not stopping Tsukushi that first day (although, as many people have noted, there wasn't a particularly happy end in sight no matter how everything went) and for it to end there, with Sakura on a mental precipice. Then again, I happen to like it when tragic oneshots end on an uncertain note,
All in all, an interesting premise with lackluster execution imo.
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