The "best" is the learning experience. You can't expect people to know exactly what they want at all times. You're so pessimistic about creatures that are still learning about....EVERYTHING! And buddy, you know where this pessimistic attitude of yours comes from? Form indulging in fantasy. you've become so detached from reality that it sours you when something real happens. You see it as a complete negative because it wasn't a "happy" ending when in reality happy is subjective and the learning experience they both got will help them grow and make better decisions. Life for humans is about learning. This story was a complete happy ending because they learned from it. Breaks ups aren't always a bad thing. I'm surprised you're even alive to type all that delusional crap with how miserable you seem to be with reality. I'm not gonna tell you to get help but just because you can't into reality, doesn't mean you need to bring your shitty attitude and project

i don't see ANY" learning experience" as you say. everything just come back as it was at the begining of the story. tell me where is the progress because i don't see it. both character are the same by the end of the story nothing have really change. for me this relationship was a complete waste of time so learning what? i ask.

We literally, and I mean literally already know that she doesn't end up alone. The artist said blatantly that this was a prologue to a manga they had already been working on, in which Miwa (short-haired girl) starts going out with two-tone-hair girl. You really can't just wait for the next installment to see that happen?

it won't erase the very sour taste of this one in my mind. or the feeling of wasted time.

true reallity is cruel and always end bad. as we can see in this story. for me it's definitly a bad ending for short haired girl. why would you put reallity in manga? isn't life sh*tty enough? that's why fantasy as been created because reality never turns well and this story just proves it.

Wow. It sounds like you've had a rough time of it. However, now you're just projecting onto reality. Humans aren't nearly as incapable of having healthy and affectionate relationships as you seem to think they are, and I can't really see why you're taking that position here. It's quite silly, to be honest.

well if people have healthy realationship in this sh*tty world i haven't seen it yet. every relationship i saw just ended badly.like in this story. i feel deceived because i thought it was going to be a cute story.instead i got a sour and pointless ending like nothing happened. reminds of waste of time just like in real life.

Why don’t you at least try to appreciate and make the best out of the story. I’ve seen plenty of shit relationships and have been in one, but I still appreciate this story.

i don't know maybe because their ISN'T any "best" to get out of it. the relationship didn't end well both of them lost their time, end of the story. not talking about short haired girl ending up alone and suffering for nothing (because she said she cried "a little" )

last edited at May 24, 2018 12:50PM

true reallity is cruel and always end bad. as we can see in this story. for me it's definitly a bad ending for short haired girl. why would you put reallity in manga? isn't life sh*tty enough? that's why fantasy as been created because reality never turns well and this story just proves it.

Wow. It sounds like you've had a rough time of it. However, now you're just projecting onto reality. Humans aren't nearly as incapable of having healthy and affectionate relationships as you seem to think they are, and I can't really see why you're taking that position here. It's quite silly, to be honest.

well if people have healthy realationship in this sh*tty world i haven't seen it yet. every relationship i saw just ended badly.like in this story. i feel deceived because i thought it was going to be a cute story.instead i got a sour and pointless ending like nothing happened. reminds of waste of time just like in real life.

last edited at May 24, 2018 12:40PM

That was good. It's nice to see a story about a relationship failing. That's what happens more often than not, especially when you start dating on a whim while drunk, but there just aren't many stories where that's what happens.

But are we reading yuri for realism? No. We are reading for the girl x girl relationship. That's why this is a bit of an unsatisfying story.

completly agree. people who wants realism only needs to get outside and see real life. or else WHAT is the point reading mangas if they begin reflect reality?! seriously!

It's in bad taste for men to go out and just stare at lesbians and intervene in their daily lives. There's very little in the way of good Western media and art that depict female relationships. There is good and interesting stuff, but the Japanese, anime, manga, whatever, these or they are the ones churning this shit out like butter. which is nice, but a sense of realism is even nicer because than you can possibly immerse yourself in the story knowing its a very real possibility. You can admire what is possible. May not be possible for men to become this thing we indulge in, but that doesn't mean fantasy is most desirable.

true reallity is cruel and always end bad. as we can see in this story. for me it's definitly a bad ending for short haired girl. why would you put reallity in manga? isn't life sh*tty enough? that's why fantasy as been created because reality never turns well and this story just proves it.

last edited at May 24, 2018 12:18PM

That was good. It's nice to see a story about a relationship failing. That's what happens more often than not, especially when you start dating on a whim while drunk, but there just aren't many stories where that's what happens.

But are we reading yuri for realism? No. We are reading for the girl x girl relationship. That's why this is a bit of an unsatisfying story.

completly agree. people who wants realism only needs to get outside and see real life. or else WHAT is the point reading mangas if they begin reflect reality?! seriously!

last edited at May 24, 2018 11:44AM

without any drama that was really sour! just a pointless relationship leading to nothing. give me back the time i wasted reading this!

last edited at May 24, 2018 3:52AM

am i the only one thinking senpai looks like kashima in gekkan shoujo nozaki kun?

am i the only one who liked hikari's characters? i feel bad for her. of course she did mistakes but it was because she has difficulties dealing with unrequited love, at that age that's normal she reacts like this she was suffering and spending time with the one she loved without being able to confess didn't make things better. she couldn't let go and that's why ai was kinda pushy. some way to tell hikari "just let go". for someone who only tried to get hikari out of maho and miyako's way ai really cared about hikari and was more compassionate than anyone in this story (even more than this idiot maho who don't see anything even if it's right in front of her nose and this miyako b*tch just telling hikari couldn't be honnest with her feellings and was pathetic! well if you weren't there hikari would have confessed you b*tchlus she don't have a word to say because she was just a coward who gave up on her first love because she feared her mother she don't even know what is urequited love so how could she say such things about hikari when she don't even know what she's going through! in contrarise ai knew how it felt because of what happened with miyako) hikari could have tried to break their relationship but she never thought about it once! all she needed was to move on.

last edited at May 21, 2018 12:21PM

This was a nice short story, I really recommend it!
(I liked the art style, does anyone else?)

yeah me too! (years later! lol)

last edited at May 11, 2018 2:50PM

i really loved how little imari stand out of the "fragile little woman" thing! when she rises angainst rika to say "i'm not afraid of you" there're lots of thing about her that are kind of original but i won't say anymore! this would be spoil. and i loved the fact that big imari was kind of girlish despite her appearence instead of the tomboyish prince whe're so used to see.

last edited at May 11, 2018 2:51PM

u tired cuz you're starting to realise ayumu is nice person n she's ain't that bad, don't be shy I won't blame u, it's understandable after all

no no i'm not tired because of that i really hate ayumu for me she still stay a horrible b*tch carreless about the wrong things she has done. she really pisses me off. (and my english is comming to its limit it's kind of hard to huh... speak for me because it's not my language.) but anyway that was fun to debate with you. and i want to make one last thing clear: i admit it's only MY opinion i really hate ayumu for all the reason i said earlier that doesn't mean it's THE truth obviously! but for me she's still the b*tch who couldn't be honnest. and above that an irresponsible coward.

last edited at May 11, 2018 1:35PM

i think kiyo really loved the mc. she didn't answer honestly because i think she knew about how bad her health condition would be. she said she escaped from the hospital. we can see that the MC is the first person she's goind to meet. for me that means she wanted to spend the few time she had left with MC. but it's just a personal opinion...

anyway i hope tsubomi will find somone better than this b*tch. (but i hope it won't be incest.)
oh yeah Im well aware ayumu wasn't honest, but that's it no more no less than that, did u realise it?

btw have u read, kimi koi limit by momono moto?
in comparison to sono,
ayumu ain't kind of a girl who likes to use other ppl body as a substitute for her unrequited love,
she also aint one hell of a scumbag girl who calls other ppl name in the middle of having sex with her girlfriend.
ayumu legit kept the relationship with tsu as healthy as possible,
she's too nice, she didn't even have a gut to cross the line until she 100% sure about her feeling for tsu.

but it can't be helped, ayumu loves her sayo too much.
given those facts, I think blaming ayumu despite her best effort to love tsu is wrong, especially when ayumu is really nice person by nature. completely blaming other party just cuz they couldn't reciprocate ur feeling is so childish dude,

plz stop treating tsu as a tragic heroine, pftt
she's nthn but a half assed girl, I mean u know
everything she did in her relationship with ayumu are according to her friend's advices.

I think it wouldn't be too far fetched if I said tsu decided to break up thanks to her friend advice,
she's been doing it all the time u know

i'm not blaming ayumu because she couldn't reciprocate i'm blaming her because she dated somone she didn't love. that's completly different. if you don't love someone then don't date him/her! that's simple! for me this make her the worst! (not talking about the fact she is a siscon) you know you have a sis complex and can't get over it, then WHY would you date someone knowing you don't love this someone? she didn't shown any interest about tsubomi that's normal tsubomi would break up someday their relationship was going nowhere that was the most logical think to do. if ayumu tried to show interest in tsubomi i haven't seen it yet because except acting like some robot i haven't seen her do anything more. she seems completly careless. why would you keep going on such a relationship? ayumu isn't nice she's just a complete careless idiot.i stop here because i'm tired thinking about this disgusting character.

last edited at May 11, 2018 11:20AM

seems like a fake happy ending for me. the scarf girl loved some senpai so why does she act like that with rui? it looks like a big misunderstanding.

anyway i hope tsubomi will find somone better than this b*tch. (but i hope it won't be incest.)

if I were in that situation, there's someone who kept chasing me so hard all the time like that, most likely Id say yes too (just like ayumu) in order to make em happy but Id still keep our relationship as friends 4ever.

it should be noted,
ayumu didn't even use tsu as her cum disposal or anythn like that u know. ayumu literally didn't even touch tsu, she legit didn't use her as a substitute for her sister, she only needed a friend n most likely she accepted tsu as her lover out of pity or smthn

this might've slipped your mind so let me enlighten u,
despite her love for her sister, ayumu even tried to love tsu u know, but it can't be helped.. she couldn't. she's nicer than u think, at least she's not as cruel as me. lol

as for tsu,
she should've realized sooner when ayumu literally has been constantly tlkn about her sister, but still she's doing nthn but feign ignorance for Months.
tsuu was simply too desperate for ayumu pussy n it's really pathetic,
on top of that she still broke with her in the end anyway. how ridiculous pftt

tsu is such a half assed girl imo, if u really do love ayumu at least don't give up halfway, not only she's the one who broke the relationship n then she's being a shitty person by literally mocking ayumu n her sister in the middle of the street for being in incestuous relationship.
the Heck girl, get ur shit together, don't stuck in the past n spewing hates like that.

ayumu did nthn wrong

ayumu wasn't honnest! she dated tsubomi EVEN when she she didn't love her she is a f*cking coward who couldn't say no! that's completly different. tsubomi was serious (why woudn't she be?! while the other b*tch didn't say anything?) tsubomi is really the victime of ayumu because this idiot was completly careless about anything. plus talking about someone doesn't meen you love that "someone". tsubomi could have thought that her shitty girlfriend was just proud of her sister. i meen NO ONE will think that their girlfriend are into their sister. i think ayumu really deserved tsubomi's anger! "mocking ayumu and her sister in the middle of the street i thing they deserved it especially ayumu! because even after she's hurt tsubomi that much (she knew tsubomi was serious and even with that she didn't even show any interest.) tsubomi is full of anger and that understandable when you see the person you loved just act as a sh*tty person who don't care about how much she hurt you. plus for INCEST? seriously? tsubomi's right to be angry. she just shout out the truth in their face and that's all. tsubomi was in love and ayumu just played with her even if she didn't do anything physical she made tsubomi believes she loved her and that's just unforgivable. tsubomi broke because she saw ayumu wasn't into their relationship that's normal because when she saw ayumu didn't put any effort in their relatioship and she was the only one trying she just dump her! that's normal! that won't change the fact that she was hurt by ayumu's carelesness. ayumu tried to love tsubomi? don't make me laught she didn't even tried a little bit.

an ancient greek philosopher once said, "you reap wut u sow"

if tsu had left ayumu sooner, Im sure she wouldn't have to go through any suffering. idk if it's me but I get the feeling tsu might've realized ayumu's tendency from the very beginning, but still she chose to be with her anyway. as result
it's inevitable for tsu to get hurted in the end, I guess u could say, she got wut she deserved. ayumu did nthn wrong

"ayumu did nothing wrong?!" are you kidding? now it's tsubomi's fault for being IN LOVE? seriously? poor tsubumi just fell in love with some *ssh*ole and now she's the one to blame for loving this b*tch?! find another excuse! ayumu is CLEARLY at fault for not being honnest. she didn't care about tsubomi's feeling. tsubomi didn't "sow" anything.she did like every people in love would have done! she tried to make it work! she couldn't have guess this lame excuse of a girlfriend (and of a human being) was that much into her sister. ayumu knew tsubomi loved her but still she didn't care from the begining. she is clearly the bad guy she have NO excuse! she wasn't honnest she didn't care and she dates tsubomi knowing she wasn't serious about her!

last edited at May 10, 2018 9:39AM

Even in that case, Ayumu shouldn't have pretended to be in a serious relationship

If later chapters are any indication, all she wanted from other girls was sex anyway

Which ironically, she won't initiate with Tsubomi ...She can't bring herself to kiss her either (poor Tsu)

Even in the other series, Ayumu lies to Sayo about Tsubomi for no reason, and ignores the latter's phone calls

If she had been honest from the beginning, then she wouldn't look so bad right now

seriously f*ck ayumu! i don't want to hear about her ever. this b*tch disgusts me. if mochi make another chapter with her i won't even read it. anyway poor mikki! she's taking all the blame for the aunt prank :D i couldn't stop laugthing!

last edited at May 9, 2018 8:23PM

waaaaaah so much cuteness isn't good for my heart!! the characters are beautiful.

This so freaking depressing when you think of their future.

you're right the immortality think ruined it all. elizabeth will die and everything will be as it was at the begining. nothing has really changed. except that the mc will see the one she finally love die and will suffer more than ever for the "rest" of her eternal life.

last edited at May 5, 2018 11:37AM

i'm disgusted! i feel completly deceived! poor tsubomi! so daidou was a b*tch from the begining! she did'nt even shown any remorse about litteraly breaking tsubomi! spoiler because when she meet tsubomi again she didn't even realised that tsubomi was hurt by what she did! she lives happily with her sister while tsubomi lives unhappy and full of hatred and all this b*tch find good to say is: "she wasn't like that back then" who's fault do you think it is?! you just broke her! NOW i really hate daidou! plus it was obvious that tsubomi still loved her even after all this time!

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/yuri_natsu_kagaya_inn_ch41#2

Ayumu really should have been honest from the beginning

It's kinda hard to see her happy with Sayo now, knowing how terrible she was to Tsubomi

you know what pisses me off the most? it's when sayo said: i can't believe you were in a relationship with this b*tch.
that is really unfair because Ayumu IS the real b*tch. it's exactly how you said! she wasn't honnest and even didn't care about being honnest some day! the reader's ending thinking that Tsubomi IS the bad guy but in contrarise! she is the victime. ayumu just dated a girl she didn't really love, this girl ended up taking their relationship really seriously (even thinking about getting married!) how does she think tsubomi was going to act after being so neglected by the one she loves? of course she is angry and she's right! and just for that this idiot sayo just say she's a "b*tch"? i was really mad when i saw that!

last edited at May 4, 2018 7:11PM

The real problem for Tsu is being a non-siscon in a siscon universe. She should date the woman giving her advice, and her non-girlfriend should go "Find Her Sister on a Dating Site."

How do you know that Tsubomi is not actually a siscon in denial, and that her pursuit of Ayumu was partly out of a desire to "prove" that she's not a siscon?

What if... what if... she's a mom con!?!!?!

tsubomi was really into daidou. i don't think she is neither a siscon nor a huh... "momcon?" she really loved daidou and when she meet her in "find my sister on a dating site" she's still mad about what daidou did. i don't think she managed to get over her she was REALLY in love i think...

This ended up having more drama than I expected.

yeah! mochi was the only one i could trust for not making drama! where's the world going if even mochi add drama in his/ her cute fantasy? just WHY this unecessary drama?!

last edited at Apr 29, 2018 11:12PM

i'm disgusted! i feel completly deceived! poor tsubomi! so daidou was a b*tch from the begining! she did'nt even shown any remorse about litteraly breaking tsubomi! spoiler because when she meet tsubomi again she didn't even realised that tsubomi was hurt by what she did! she lives happily with her sister while tsubomi lives unhappy and full of hatred and all this b*tch find good to say is: "she wasn't like that back then" who's fault do you think it is?! you just broke her! NOW i really hate daidou! plus it was obvious that tsubomi still loved her even after all this time!

last edited at Apr 29, 2018 10:51PM