Eh? Two chapters? Really? Seems like it could get 10 at a minimum. Well, as long as the ending isn't total crap (someone said it's open ended but if it's not terribly written it shouldn't be an issue).
It's more like the ending does not feel like an ending, it certainly was not written as one (and if it was the intent it was a pretty poor attempt), it's abrupt. "Open end", might be a bit of a stretch to call it that because it implies that it was written as so. It's not crap, it's not good, it's more of an "eh, thats it?... ok, I guess..." not something I would like to hear about a story's ending tho. People who read it in spanish are probably not aware that it is complete, just like many who won't read the comments here will probably be waiting for it to continue. Disappointment? I'd say yes, it could've been something interesting.
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