I assume that's some kind of frog-face clip in her hair, but it looks like she's got a hole in her head.

Yep, that's some Mira alrighty. Love it. Love the comic dialogue. Love the D&D-esque setting. Looking forward to more.

I do always appreciate it when people actually end up laughing during sexytimes. To me, it's a sign of great intimacy.

Same here, and that was indeed one of the things I was trying to convey. Nice to know I successfully conveyed that to at least one person. :D

(The other thing I think it conveys is a firm sense of relationship security. You gotta be really secure in your relationship to laugh while you're having sex.)

It is probably just me, but I have very mixed feelings about it. I like the idea but either it is too short or too long. Like I get the joke, but because set up for it is so long and then once she sniffs and we know where it will go, we have entire conversation before the "punch line" lands and then they still talk some more, it feels a bit dragged on and feels like it would work better as quick, few panels joke. The way it is right now it feels like a set up to serious bdsm story which then suddenly turns into more light hearted one and either forsake the bdsm theme entirely or continue it with more playful tone. Basically it feels more like first few pages of doujin with rest of them missing, which puts bummer on reader (me), because I want it to continue. Take it as you will.

I very much appreciate your detailed thoughts! Thorough feedback is a godsend.

My intent was mainly to show the two characters in a positive light, and also to show that a BDSM relationship can be warm and loving. The joke is a means to that end, rather than being an end unto itself.

I dunno if that will enhance your enjoyment or not, but there it is.

@Ropponmatsu

I was wondering when you would show up! I was hoping you would see this. What with us being BDSM Pals and all.

Just out of idle curiosity, though, would you be interested in doing a sort of a reverse translation? Translating it into Japanese? I have saved a copy of the raws with no dialogue or speech balloons. Very clean.

I was wrong not exactly the bdsm then, but the sadistic side of it

Maybe this then?

Murmurs in the Background - One-Upmanship

More hand holding!

Whoa whoa whoa. What kind of filthy pervert do you take me for?

Can I get an uploader to update Murmurs in the Background - Betrayal for me?

The current Page 2 https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/murmurs_in_the_background_betrayal#2 needs to be replaced with this:

http://i.imgur.com/UHwNwEK.jpg

in order to correct a minor typo. Thanks!

Whoa. Seeing this pop up in the forum thread listing was kind of a rush.

I got excited for nothing :{

How can I make it up to you?

Fifth-wheel x Fifth-wheel

I liked Lily Love a great deal. Am definitely looking forward to seeing how Ice deals with Ploy.

Mew, Donut, and (most importantly) Leo!

Yep, that's about exactly how I perform oral sex. Including the two fingers in the ass.

If you don't come up looking like a glazed donut, you're not doing it right.

Kitakami clueless as ever.

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Whenever there's a BDSM-themed image or manga uploaded here, a few people will inevitably exclaim that we need more BDSM yuri.

Well if you're one of those folks, have I got a manga for you.

Murmurs in the Background - Betrayal

This is an actual comic (albeit a short one). It's got artwork and everything. I wrote it, and hired an artist to do the drorings. Six pages. Cost me $150 US. The things I do for you people.

It's cute! It's romantic! It's funny! It's yuri! It has whips and chains! Starring Saejima x Ichiha, the BDSM-themed antagonists from the first episode of Valkyrie Drive: Mermaid.

Check it out, won't you?

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So the latest additions to this storyline kinda reduce the impact of the first chapter, IMHO. The suddenness of the romance between them loses something when you find out that, no, they've had these feelings for a while.

@Dark_Tzitzmine: My artist finally got around to finishing the Saejima x Ichiha comic I wrote a few months back. I felt you'd wish to know.

http://imgur.com/a/DX4Pz

Okay, here's a BDSM-themed manga I wrote, that has been illustrated by someone else. It's taken a LOT longer to get it finished than I figured it would take for six pages. Still, it's a done deal, and hopefully you will get a kick out of it.

http://imgur.com/a/DX4Pz

Not sure where the "running out of ideas" comes from

The afterword, page 34, where she says it herself.

Unfortunately this comic is from 4 years ago, and the artist has since deleted all of their accounts.

And has since resurfaced as Mochi au Lait? Because, like others, I have noticed a strong similarity in the art style.

I still don't know a whole lot about Touhou Project, but I love me some Mokou x Kaguya. And this was one of the best.

Mira sure does like this pairing.

That's okay. So do I. This hits the same sweet spot of "love and affection and romance between two super-horny-all-the-time characters" that "From Now On, Together With Senpai" also hits. I can see Kaya-chan being like Maika-senpai when she grows up.

Welp, I've learned enough about Touhou Project to be able to recognize Mokou (and by extension Kaguya), Flandre, Remilia, Kagerou, and Wakasagihime.

I thiiink the very first page is Reimu (and therefore Yukari)? I think Page 12 is Cirno (and therefore Daiyousei)? Page 16 is Meiling and Sakuya? Page 23 is Patchy (and therefore Koakuma)?

Sequel to?

Office Lady Cumming Just From Getting Tits Groped Manga

and

Let's Get Wet

Nagato is gonna end up with a hole in her leg if she ain't careful.

I am generally not one to go down with a ship. Crack ships, weird ships, battle ships, I don't care. But damn, Mezashi has ruined me for Yoshiko being paired with anybody but Hanamaru, or vice versa.

Epic

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Why would George Takei have four different accounts?

We're all Takei now.

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