Why is her tail visible if her horns aren't?

I think they should have a trained medical professional take a look at those unsightly growths.

Ch.2 first page, is this in the original or a relic of translation?
"Lady Harmony, blah blah . . . "
" . . . and you ain't calling me 'lady Harmony' any more."

But, surely she just did call her 'lady Harmony'.

Eeeh maybe she stopped calling her Harmony-sama and started calling her Harmony-san or something, like, dropped the honorifics.

I'm sure what is meant is a command to stop using the honorific and just call her Harmony. "...and you ain't [going to] call(ing) me 'lady Harmony' any more."

Either way, it's clear that the wording is unclear at best in the English version.

Clearly unclear.

Just how long has that crazy sheep-beast been up there tending that empty cafe anyway?

ever since the..alpacalyspe

You. I like you. Don't listen to these other folks. They don't appreciate you like I do.

Dat glomp tho.

Thought this was Honks x Tsubasa from the thumbnail.

Nice liplock.

Agreefests are boring.

No they're not.

minor error in pg 2 was fixed http://www.mediafire.com/file/gok1020aeo84b00/Murmurs+in+the+Background+-+Betrayal+-+Imgur+%28fixed%29.rar

Looks like the fix didn't actually get uploaded? Might be a caching issue on my end, though.

My brain kept reading "Breast Master" for some reason... :D

Your subconscious was probably picking up on the subtle boob references.

Can I say I like the idea that the girl who gets accosted turns out to be a top?

We are as siblings in this regard.

^^^ Goddamn yuikumari I laughed for a good two minutes at that.

I'm getting Eddie Izzard vibes.

I assume that's some kind of frog-face clip in her hair, but it looks like she's got a hole in her head.

Yep, that's some Mira alrighty. Love it. Love the comic dialogue. Love the D&D-esque setting. Looking forward to more.

I do always appreciate it when people actually end up laughing during sexytimes. To me, it's a sign of great intimacy.

Same here, and that was indeed one of the things I was trying to convey. Nice to know I successfully conveyed that to at least one person. :D

(The other thing I think it conveys is a firm sense of relationship security. You gotta be really secure in your relationship to laugh while you're having sex.)

It is probably just me, but I have very mixed feelings about it. I like the idea but either it is too short or too long. Like I get the joke, but because set up for it is so long and then once she sniffs and we know where it will go, we have entire conversation before the "punch line" lands and then they still talk some more, it feels a bit dragged on and feels like it would work better as quick, few panels joke. The way it is right now it feels like a set up to serious bdsm story which then suddenly turns into more light hearted one and either forsake the bdsm theme entirely or continue it with more playful tone. Basically it feels more like first few pages of doujin with rest of them missing, which puts bummer on reader (me), because I want it to continue. Take it as you will.

I very much appreciate your detailed thoughts! Thorough feedback is a godsend.

My intent was mainly to show the two characters in a positive light, and also to show that a BDSM relationship can be warm and loving. The joke is a means to that end, rather than being an end unto itself.

I dunno if that will enhance your enjoyment or not, but there it is.

@Ropponmatsu

I was wondering when you would show up! I was hoping you would see this. What with us being BDSM Pals and all.

Just out of idle curiosity, though, would you be interested in doing a sort of a reverse translation? Translating it into Japanese? I have saved a copy of the raws with no dialogue or speech balloons. Very clean.

I was wrong not exactly the bdsm then, but the sadistic side of it

Maybe this then?

Murmurs in the Background - One-Upmanship

More hand holding!

Whoa whoa whoa. What kind of filthy pervert do you take me for?

Can I get an uploader to update Murmurs in the Background - Betrayal for me?

The current Page 2 https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/murmurs_in_the_background_betrayal#2 needs to be replaced with this:

http://i.imgur.com/UHwNwEK.jpg

in order to correct a minor typo. Thanks!

Whoa. Seeing this pop up in the forum thread listing was kind of a rush.

I got excited for nothing :{

How can I make it up to you?

Fifth-wheel x Fifth-wheel

I liked Lily Love a great deal. Am definitely looking forward to seeing how Ice deals with Ploy.

Mew, Donut, and (most importantly) Leo!

Yep, that's about exactly how I perform oral sex. Including the two fingers in the ass.

If you don't come up looking like a glazed donut, you're not doing it right.

Kitakami clueless as ever.

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