Can someone explain what's the reason behind not staying with her in her very last moment? Shizuku got to whisper the words and just left to edit the ending she already wrote.
Wouldn't it have been much better to just do that where Kaori was, give her the story and get her response in person?
Like, she confessed alright, but they didn't exactly get to say goodbye? And I can't understand why you wouldn't want to spend every last minute with the girl you love when you know her every minute could be her last.
... She can't?
Kaori is in a hospital and Shizuku isn't related, so she doesn't have visitation rights.
It's a huge part of why same-sex marriage is such a big issue in Japan.
Also I don't think she had her story saved in cloud storage. Which is... an issue, but the author probably just didn't think about cloud storage, and when they did, that can be justified by "Shizuku is a teenager in Japan, where computer literacy is surprisingly low."
edit: it's kind of insane to me that ergzay thinks every story in which characters fall in love is by necessity a romance; this is definitely a drama before it's anything else
While what you said is true (about the fact that she doesn't have the same visitation rights as Kaori's family), I don't think that was the message. We are clearly seeing Shizuku being overwhelmed by the situation and her own feeling, and is unable to face Kaori properly after confessing. She is clearly running away, giving as an excuse the fact that she needs to send the novel.
I don't get the people that are saying this is pointless, looks quite like a childish reaction to me, especially when we knew from the start that Kaori would die. Next time, just don't read a story about people that are terminally ill….
The chapter was really beautiful. I like how the author was able to convey Shikuzu's feeling of not being prepared for her death. As readers, it looks like most of us were in the same situation, and it's a good parallel to what Shikuzu is facing. I hope the epilogue will be a long one. I'd like to see Shikuzu a few years later, and how that experience shaped her for the best.