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The power foundation typo is very funny, though for some reason it makes me sad she dyed her hair.

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@Admins: The chapters are out of order.

Edit: It's been fixed. Thanks!

Using "next/prev Ch." chapter 1 is followed by chapter 3, and chapter 2 comes after chapter 5.

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Blue Friend discussion 02 Aug 22:30
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The chapter-only tags are off (4→5, 5→6).

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Ugh... rape

For real? Making a move is not rape. She had the opportunity to vocalize her non-consent, or to physically resist, but chose to go with it. She was not restrained, and nothing was against her will. Sure it was somewhat sudden, and a little more warning would have been more appropriate, but no crimes were committed here.

I agree with that it was only another uncharacteristically insensitive act. Rin trusted Hanayo the whole time. She only voiced her confusion and reacted to the pain, but didn't try to stop whatever Hanayo was doing. It not being rape doesn't mean anyone should take it as an example to be followed, though.

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Image Comments 20 May 09:25
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It's a shame how sexist this game is. To me that makes it over-appreciated.

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Thanks for the tag update and for letting it be hosted on Dynasty. Even if there is no romance (yet), it's funny so far, and it probably will be as long as it won't have too much angst. (Some of the readers would be fine with the angst, too.)

I noticed another change in the tags, but the non-webcomic series isn't always a 4-koma (besides the expanded stories and more characters, that's the main difference, it seems). Blushing could be in its place, because it applies to this one, too. Or Blushing could just be added, because some parts are still in 1-column 4-koma format, while big parts have all kinds and number of panels. I'm not sure whether 4-koma should stay or not...

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Is there any basis for the Romance tag?

Kiena
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Chapter 21, page 8: "bu"
I guess it wanted to be "but," but that doesn't seem necessary in the sentence.

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Chapter 19, page 7: "no where" → "nowhere"

Even if that slipped in, it's nice that new chapters are released so frequently.

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What a cliffhanger...

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Image Comments 20 Apr 15:27
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Noir04

There's at least one on-screen kiss that does not involve the main leads

It involves one of them, doesn't it? Noir is still one of my favorite yuri anime from Bee Train, despite the notorious ambiguity of gay relationships in their shows. Along with .hack//Sign (canonized in a novel or manga continuation), El Cazador de la Bruja (where it may be closest to text), Madlax (on the back seat), and Avenger (where the plot is against having a lesbian relationship exclusively). I can't remember whether Murder Princess or others are worth mentioning.

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Still Sick discussion 08 Apr 01:59
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Isn't that an empty bubble in the 3rd panel of page 13 (chapter 6)?

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The Drama tag of the original series would fit this sequel much better than Comedy...

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Chapter 53.5, page 7: "Didn't you get get a C on that mock exam the other day?"

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Lily Marble discussion 04 Apr 05:26
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Chapter 22, page 8: "But I've never know anyone like that before," ("known")

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Yuri Moyou discussion 01 Apr 06:43
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Chapter 21 page 1: "I'm close with I've known for years"
"I'm close with and I've known for years" or "I'm close with" = "I've known for years"?

Kiena
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An alright start, then a nauseating amount of male validation, then a disappointing ending. Emi's interest in guys is shown to be only about a princess needing a prince, but it still makes Kaori's romantic feelings—what are behind her jealousy—remain one-sided by the end. There is no undeniable sign of Emi even considering a romantic relationship with Kaori (yet)...

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There is a tiny typo on page 7 of chapter 48: "I want us to holds hands, too!" (Hold.)

Thanks for translating this volume, too, and looking forward to the next.

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On page 23 isn't what Makoto says supposed to be "They're an aspiring mangaka!"?

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My first thought when I read about swapping with others was that it could've worked with a new set of characters, maybe 3 to 6. Then couples and/or polyamory coming from that, restricting who swaps with whom, would have been a nice romantic development. Instead of undermining how serious the known characters' feelings are for each other. This late, especially after their reluctance before, switching to that will probably devalue everything.

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Do they, like, only have one set of clothes or something?

My exact thoughts, too.

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The gradual changes in the characters' looks have made this manga quite unique, and the story is still promising, as long as Izumi turns out to be "just" a good friend, not part of a love triangle... (Dear My Teacher worries.)

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Page 9: "hang out out again"

I'm glad it continues. At this pace there should be a lot of room for volumes yet. Not just for two either. It may be a rare case when the main couple is the cutest, but there could be stories about the others, too.

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Blushing eyes is a noteworthy new thing for me, too.

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Stupud? (Page 8.)