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joined Apr 6, 2021

AAAAAHHHHHHH god dammit! We waited 2 months to get baited like this!? I’m in so much physical pain right now. I’ve never been catfished this hard in my life

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Ummmm... that was kind of a struggle to follow. The plot seems kind of everywhere and it almost feels like there’s pages missing. Correct me if I’m wrong but did we even see Aki tell Maki she was using her? It all seems so disjointed. I’m not even sure where the plot can go after this

last edited at Jun 1, 2021 2:53AM

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

This was a mostly enjoyable experience to read, and it had some great moments, but there are some very big unfortunate problems that this series had. The time skip came out of nowhere, and after that the story became very difficult to follow and a lot of plot points were introduced that went nowhere. Not to mention how rushed the ending felt. The time skip in general really annoyed me cause it literally happens halfway through the series and we miss pretty much everything important and just jump to “she’s leaving the band”. Then they go back in time to explain some of that, but it feels super disjointed. The story really needed about 5 more chapter to flesh out the characters a bit more, and have a bit more of a payoff for all the plot points introduced. Seira’s backstory especially needed more time, because while it did a great job deepening her character, as well as giving her some well deserved sympathy, it could have used a bit more resolution in the end. But I’m still glad I read it, and it’s definitely not a bad investment of your time lol

last edited at May 29, 2021 1:02AM

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Not the ending I was expecting, but I actually really like how this wrapped up. Kinda wish we got more than a kiss on the cheek, but in the context of the story, it still managed to put a smile on my face. Maybe one day we’ll get lucky and get an epilogue with that sweet sweet romance we’re looking for

last edited at May 27, 2021 1:48AM

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Nah I’m liking where this is going. Himari got my support. But I still ain’t sympathizing with Shiho at all. I don’t care what her reasons are or if she’s jealous of Yori or if she secretly loves Aki or something, what she did wasn’t cool. Unless this flashback changes my mind, I’m gonna say Aki should kick her to the curb.

joined Apr 6, 2021

Ngl that was kinda depressing

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Man I really liked this one, wish it was longer lol

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

I’m just gonna try to forget this and never think of it again

last edited at May 18, 2021 7:40PM

joined Apr 6, 2021

Wow that was WAY too wholesome for my fragile heart. I wish this author would do more yuri stuff, this and their other yuri series are great, albeit a little short

joined Apr 6, 2021

It’s always nice to see something from Mira, but I don’t think I’ll EVER understand S&M

joined Apr 6, 2021

This was nice, art was great, story was pretty good, characters were engaging... just wish that the ending was a bit more conclusive than “holding hands”

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Honestly... omegaverse is probably one of the weirdest and creepiest things I’ve seen on the internet

The Red Dart
Cocytus discussion 03 May 02:23
joined Apr 6, 2021

Ngl that moratorium got me feeling bad for Itsuki. Mao is Toxicity personified lmao. Glad Itsuki got some schemes of her own though

joined Apr 6, 2021

Alright so I’ve just finished every chapter currently available on this site and tbh... this feels pretty creepy to me. I love yuri and stuff like that and find it entertaining to read, but this whole “I’m gonna turn you gay” plot line doesn’t really click with me. I know that Marika was probably gay the whole time and didn’t realize it, but the way Aya is making her realize it (forced to read yuri manga/ watch lesbian porn, intense groping/kissing, and taking her to a lesbian bar) all looks like mental conditioning and sexual assault to me. I’m glad that it helped Marika get past her homophobia, cause it was kinda difficult to root for her at the start. However, Aya’s entire mindset throughout the story so far has felt fairly unsettling, especially in the first few chapters. For example, when Marika asks Aya if she’s “one of them,” Aya replies with “Soon you will be too,” I just thought “woah, that went from 0-100 REAL quick!” The story is fine if you don’t look to far into it, but Aya is honestly just as creepy as any other sugar daddy trying to make his sugar babies fall for him. But I’ll probably keep reading since the story is fun enough lol.

I know this is probably an unpopular opinion, and I apologize if you disagree, but this is still just my opinion so don’t take anything to heart

Also is it just me, or do the pages for this series take way longer to load than others? Took me about an hour to read the 5 chapters available

last edited at Apr 30, 2021 2:36AM

joined Apr 6, 2021

Honestly Sei and Aya are perfect for each other. They’re both unstable and a bad influence on everyone around them. Hope they both leave Tokyo together and never contact any of the other characters again. Haruki’s got issues too, but she definitely deserves better than Aya

Also, that stuff with the male teacher seems so unnatural cause he literally gets told that Sei is doing a student and he’s like “nah, it’s all good”. Like What!?

And I hate how we’ve reached the point where it’s about to end and now everything is gonna feel rushed af

last edited at Apr 29, 2021 3:42PM

joined Apr 6, 2021

Ngl this one looks absolutely hilarious and awesome. Can’t wait until more chapters come out! Also making every guy in the series comically sexiest is just a stupidly funny concept to me. Watching them get their asses kicked in the tournament is gonna be fantastic

last edited at Apr 29, 2021 3:15AM

joined Apr 6, 2021

I really liked this series, but it feels like the ending came out of nowhere. Did the series get the axe or something? The two main characters had great chemistry and it feels like there was a lot more story to be told (like the conservative parents for example). If the author decided to leave the series to do a yaoi side series, I’d be pretty disappointed honestly. Either way, I’m happy enough with what we got.

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Wow I just found this series and I can’t believe it got the axe. This was better than a lot of other yuri that I’ve read lately and the fluff was just amazing. Feels like WAY to many good series get the axe from Yuri Hime. Mintarou was absolutely robbed. With both this one and Hello Melancholic getting cancelled, I’m just left feeling down. I really hope Mintarou gets another serialization cause they definitely deserve it.

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

So I just finished this series and came straight to the comments to say “OMG this is amazing! Everyone should read this!” But it looks like literally everyone beat me to it lmao. At the same time though, I’m thinking “why is no one talking about this?” Right now there’s only 80 comments but this is one of the greatest yuri series I’ve ever seen! Art, characters, story... it’s all so natural and captivating!

OrangePekoe’s comment above sums up just about everything I’m feeling about this. If the series could have gotten like 10-15 more chapters, then this would probably be my favourite yuri of all time. I am genuinely heartbroken that this series got the axe, and I know I’ll be feeling it for a while.

That being said, I’d say this is still probably in my top 5 romance series. And I’ve gotta say, Yayoi handled the cancellation really well (better than a lot of other cancellations I’ve seen lol). It was obviously pretty abrupt but it still gave me just enough goodness that I can live with it. But it just feels bad that we never got to meet Ema’s partner:(.

I really wish there was a way to get more chapters, but I’m glad we still got this much. Maybe we’ll get lucky and Yayoi will do a continuation some day, sorta like Hanjuku Joshi and Motto Hanjuku Joshi. I’m gonna try to keep a little bit of hope for that lol. Or maybe an anime adaptation, which would be absolutely AMAZING

But one final thing I will say... if someone ever set up a GoFundMe to raise money for another volume, I’d definitely pay my share!

last edited at Apr 28, 2021 5:08AM

joined Apr 6, 2021

Whaaaaat this one’s so good! I really hope someone picks this up and finishes it. It too wholesome to get trapped in limbo!

joined Apr 6, 2021

Idk, I think I would’ve liked it better if the chief and Chisa got together again. I find it a little annoying that the chief finally decided to be all about the love after she chose break up with Chisa and wound up in a bad marriage. I hope the next chapter gives justice to Chisa cause unless she’s dating that other black haired woman, it really looks like she got the short end of the stick :/

Well at least everyone is in a happy relationship now and everyone is being more true to themselves. I do hope now we will get more of a story with Saki's ex as that seems like an untapped well for drama for me.

In “Romance Girls File” there’s a 2 chapter story about Saki’s Ex

Anyways, I’ll see you guys in 2023 for chapter 9!

last edited at Apr 26, 2021 3:35PM

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Dang I’m honestly torn about this one getting licensed. I’m glad the author gonna be getting some cash from it and I’ll pay for it, but it’s gonna take FOREVER for the license to catch up to where we are now:(

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

I just read this and immediately though “wtf? This was so fucking stupid!”
Idc much about the sister reveal, but the Karen thing was just stupid. Wtf even happened between Karen and You in the three year timeskip!? We can see in the epilogue that You leaves Karen a note(at least I’m interpreting it that way) and then Karen gets comforted by the long light haired girl whose name I’m not even gonna bother trying to remember. The game ends and then You is with Karen for three years? Why does Akane even worry about interfering with Karen’s happiness? She’s fucking stole You and arranged for the event to happen to all of them

ALSO...
Why was You with Karen for three years? What kept her from leaving sooner Why did Akane even stay with that long haired girl for three years anyway? The leaps in logic and lack of information piss me off so damn much. I have read series I didn’t like, I’ve read series that have pissed me off. But even then I could accept it and give the author a break for whatever reason. But this time, I just want to know WTF the author was thinking!? I’m sorry to anyone else who has read this and I’m even more sorry to those who will read it in the future. I’m going to do my best to forget this one and never think of it again

last edited at Apr 26, 2021 4:53AM

The Red Dart
Liberty discussion 22 Apr 06:16
joined Apr 6, 2021

Alright I just found and read this series in 30 minutes. I really liked it at the start, very interesting and the characters definitely grabbed my attention. The stuff about the guitar earrings and Liz’s ex were alright and I found the slave contract thing was funny enough as well. I was hooked on the series from the moment Liz was almost run over.

However, I feel that since the ex gf came back into the story, the quality has taken quite a dip. Liz is very frustrating to watch and her ex is just a manipulative piece of shit. It’s nearly impossible to sympathize with Liz at this point, and all the jokes in the comments about her having a meeting with Truck-Kun are proof of that. Not to mention that the plot became incredibly cliche and predictable the moment we found out what kind of character the ex is. It’s the same old character who did a terrible thing to their girlfriend, leaves their lives for a period of time, then expects to get back together with that same girlfriend the moment they show up again. All the while disregarding the impact of their terrible actions and using underhanded tactics to get what they want. I feel like I’ve seen this archetype a hundred times in romance/drama and at some point it just gets frustrating. The same thing goes for maki because while I still like her somewhat, the whole “constantly anxious over my relationship” archetype is annoying and pretty overused as well. The release schedule and lack of pages aren’t doing it any favours, but I’ll probably donate a bit to the official release just to see if they might give this series a couple more pages every three months.

I sincerely hope that the authors can turn this thing around and get me invested again. Have Liz do something to get me on her side again, have Maki grow a pair and confront Liz, and have the ex get told off and put in her place. I also hope that this series isn’t gonna be just 20 or so chapters because I would feel pretty cheated if over half the series was spent focusing on this ex gf stuff. Though I gotta say, it’s really not a good thing that I’m already prepping myself to feel frustrated at how this is gonna end lol. I’m gonna keep following this one and I’m gonna try to have some optimism, cause I was genuinely invested for the first 8 chapters or so.

last edited at Apr 22, 2021 6:23AM

The Red Dart
joined Apr 6, 2021

Dammit Neji would it kill ya to not go the drama route? I love ya but cant we just have a nice straightforward happy ending for once? Also why does it have to end now? I really like this one so why’s it gotta be so short:(

last edited at Apr 17, 2021 5:40AM