...oh who am I kidding: Ayano and Miki are made for each other.

I did do some looking at the other raws from this Anthology and every single story doesn't have a male character, or at best, they are a faceless rando who is in the background. So this story sticks out compared to the rest...by like a lot.

Ok, them making the best friend thinking way too hard about screwing the main character instantly jumped up my opinion on this manga. Also, the bottom left of the final page: "Nobody should take that from a showerbater". One quick google search made that even funnier.

after reading my unrequited love last chapter i thought that maybe just maybe this one could also improve to maybe be readable but well you can´t win them all

The sad part is: I still find this manga better written then that one...likely because things are happening with the main couple rather then getting delayed by side plots and side characters (and even then, this manga's side characters are still better written and there are fewer of them).

The art in this still feels kinda stiff though, if that makes any sense.

Ok, read the rest of this and I can say: I don't like any of the characters. Not all of them are written badly but hell if I can even remember their names.

So I just went though the first 15 chapters and I gotta mention something: Why does character's upper body mass keeps doubling in height? Now that I noticed once (And in a serious scene no less) I'm now just keeping a eye out for it.

"I'll use my demonic powers to impregnate you...!"

Yep. This is a good porn story.

EDIT: Honest this story is good. Just that line made me laugh since it sounds like a lot of other types of goofy fetish porn.

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Seems that this manga has finished recently and it's all view-able for free. You can google ふたりモノローグ and it should be one of the first links.

I'll give the artist this: They do remember that she does have a wedding ring on her left hand's ring finger. And not only that, but for Chapter 1, they hide the ring finger thoughout it until the end. (And for chapter 2 they don't show it at all) Still, unless the husband appears in some way, I'm gonna consider him to just be a lie for Nanako playing up the housewife angle.

I just noticed Maggie's neck on the first panel on page 16 holy crap that's gotta hurt.

I did notice something on the last page: Unlike the entire manga to this point, she has a smile. It could be possible that the boss lady did manage to get her to love her, and is joining in the harem as well because...well, mass libido. Mind you, that how I noticed and thought about the last panel. It could be that she just joined the harem and it means nothing in the long run.

Looking at the tags, this is listed under Comedy...then why didn't I laugh while reading it? Even Secret Flowers, which also has the BDSM stuff, I got laughs and enjoyed the manga, despite being mostly porn. (And I don't know much about the source material)

Not gonna lie, but this manga felt like...it had no Soul? The other Team members felt like they were Legion and if you removed them from the story, it wouldn't change much. And for the main two, we didn't see enough to want to see them together, or to agree with the other that it was fine to have tie up and rape her lover. When it tried to slow down, it was forced to speed up back into the porn.

I normally like Mira's works, but man. This felt beyond weak.

;-;

Also, I just noticed for chapter 13 pg 14, there is a typo...turns out that Mimika can't say school right twice in a row.

If you are on windows you can just use the snipping tool to grab any avatar you want.

Thank you~!

Anyone willing to make avatars of the faces in this manga? They are great and amazing. (That last page this chapter damn)

Looking at the original text, it uses 好き. Looking up it's meaning, it could go either way, either Love or like in a non romantic sense. The thing to note though is that on page 11, Mimika uses the same word, even though it's pretty obvious she loves her...guess we are just gonna have to wait and see.

...ok I dunno what is going on anymore...I need a adult.

Man, this story is not written well nor drawn...but I can't stop reading it. It's kinda like a train wreak in a way.

Found a typo...in the credits. I don't think you spell support like "Suport".

Aw yeah, I love this artist...even though I think that they like all those liquids a bit too much. (Look at some of their older works wow) I kinda wish that they would continue that Mami x OL one they had but this is cute too :)

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Um. Hello? Is anyone still translating this series or is it no longer being translated?

New chapter, yaaaaayyyy!

Having looked up the credits, this chapter was published in November 2015. I'm guessing that means the 7th chapter has been published already? (Gonna assume it hasn't been scanned yet)

I like this story and art but man, it feels like not much has happened, even compared to Sasameki Koto.

You know, I just notice something, Ploy shows up in Chapter 9 Page 8...and look at what she is saying in the first panel. Hmm...