what a pure parody on Asagi Ryuu's I fell in love for the first time <3 cute

the end hit me hard; still I'm in tears and somehow overjoyed all at once

Kiku is admirable. I think that takes some kind of bravery or supidity or despair or all at once to take that step

something smells jealous in here))))

A quick translation. I can't say it's perfect, but it's a lot closer from the original, imo:

thank you so so much <3

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every timу I read the dialogs I'm like wtf is going on? how did you come up with those words? what did you even mean?
such strange series. the storyline with succubus falling for each other was way better

hmm... the "you" in your comment is very imprecise, are you talking about the author, the characters or the translator? if i'm the one being asked, do you have an example? as far as i can tell, other than liking to use some over-the-top expressions sometimes (which are google-able), i'm using proper English, lol

no-no I was talking about the story
the plot and dialogs are so unrealistic so not-human-like and emotionless
the you is about characters

oh she slapped me, oh they patched up. how? when? what happened? Fuu just enetered and screamed baka... what happened then? how did they made up? .___. it makes zero sense to me all series long

dat credit page )))))

this is most yurish subtle I've ever read. it has more yuri than some things tagged yuri in here
lovely. interesting. easy to read. so much to think of
love is beautiful no matter the form)

this is so funny. I just love Alice)))

coming next: they cuddled alot )))

every timу I read the dialogs I'm like wtf is going on? how did you come up with those words? what did you even mean?
such strange series. the storyline with succubus falling for each other was way better

ah it's so good to see this author after so long) I just love the plot and art and... ahh <333

ah gawd this is so precious. I've never loved their pairing more than in this work

subtle yuri breaks my gay heart

is it yuri? no?

Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso vibes ?

I just love reading credits))))) thank you for your work and humor <3

wait why yandere vibes are bad agian? and toxic relationships?

does everybody know we're on the reader where taiyaki and itou hachi are dearly loved?))))
nevermind "love you cruddy")))

that hurt a lot ( really (

where is the wtf tag? why is it yuri? (

so it ain't yuri after all?( now that's some sad news (

ah, I miss them...

Nico is daydreaming about afterdate ;>

no kiss is just a crime. everyone needs to be punished for the works with a love confession and no kissing. for example to watch cool tv series with no oportunity to watch the last episode

reread the series before the bonus! damn it's good to read in one go )
I wish there were a couple more extras <3