Woke her ass up real fast. :P

To be honest, with the angle of Rin's head it seems obvious she wasn't intentionally trying to look up Nadeshiko's skirt, not to mention she couldn't at that angle. Nadeshiko's but is at or above Rin's hairline, and humans usually can't see much above their brow, far below their hairline. Even if Rin was at the right angle to see something, her hair is in the way. Looks more like Rin was looking for something on the floor and bumped into Nadeshiko, or Rin was in the process of getting up and her head impacted Nadeshiko's rear-end. Would make sense why Rin's legs are slightly bent, as she still seems to be in the processing of getting up from a crouching position.

This is still cute either way, though. :3

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I want to believe that their friends weren't being malicious when they said they wanted to go tease them. I think it's less "Let's go bully those disgusting lesbians" and more "Let's tease that cute couple and watch them be adorkably in love." There's a difference between bullying those deemed weak/different and teasing those deemed cute and adorable. With that said, it could still have been out of malice for all I know. It's just that it seems plainly obvious they were all happy that the two girls next door hooked up and simply wanted to lightly tease the new couple.

Edit: Also, the fact that it clearly says "excited" in the same panel as one of the girls giving the thumbs up would suggest it's a good thing that it happened and that they wholly support it.

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I agree with some other readers. Definitely seems like Kanade might be leaning towards a Yandere type of personality, specifically based around the ideology of keeping that which is pretty, pretty. Even if it's at the cost of herself or others. I look forward to Kanade becoming super possessive of Nanaki and developing borderline murderous tendencies towards those who hurt Nanaki, as well as towards Nanaki when she tries to run. Still want a happy, gay ending though, preferably without too much bloodshed. :3

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Adorable so far. Time to play catch up! :D

"I really want to hug her..." What are you waiting for? Do it now!

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I actually really liked chapter 10's iteration of Cinderella. The idea that the magic user, who actually knows Cinderella, what she puts up with, and wants to use their magic to make her happy, ends up with her instead of the Prince seems a lot deeper than "Girl meets prince, then get married cause he's royalty." I legit want to see something similar as a full series.

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To be honest, I am slightly disappointed that this was not about the couple on the cover.

I'm not 100% certain, but I think the couple on the cover and the couple in the actual manga are two and the same. It just seems like the cover is what they will look like later in their lives together, where the streamer cut her hair, and her girlfriend let hers grow out. It also seems to be implied that they are living together in the cover picture.

At the very least, it would make sense that they are the same, what with the dark haired one being on her computer (probably) streaming.

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I think chapter 2 is missing. The chapter that is currently titled as chapter two, the one introducing the little sister, has "chapter 3" on the first page.

Edit: Now I'm confused. The following chapter, the one that is currently titled chapter 3, is also called chapter 3. Am I going crazy or something?

last edited at May 8, 2018 9:14AM

Really cute mini-series. Hopefully we see more of this adorable duo!

On a separate note: I don't know why but that credits page, with the younger Tomo Smiling like that, makes me feel sad. There's nothing sad about it in this particular story, but it reminds me too much of other stories where they show similar flashbacks during a tragic part of said story. Am I experiencing an extremely faint case of ptsd, or am I just being dumb?

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Wait, what? 6 fingers? I mean, I guess it's nice that the artist was consistent, but that caught me off guard. As if the chocolate kiss wasn't distracting enough. :3

Well, she's sober now.

This made me laugh harder than it should have. :P

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Oh, that's what confused me about the "it'll hurt afterwards" scene, the word balloon is pointing at the wrong person! I couldn't figure out why Hina was saying that so it seemed to say "stop touching me" when it was actually Sato's line saying "stop biting your finger/holding back".

Page 10, right? I'm pretty sure that was Hinako talking about her nipples. If Satomi were to stimulate them too much they'll likely hurt later on due to how sore they'll become, and Hinako probably wanted to avoid that. I'm positive that is Hinako's word balloon, not Satomi's.

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@Tyrswed Sorry for the late reply.

Thanks for the information. I wasn't aware that Tanya had thought that way initially, although maybe it was touched upon in the anime and I just missed that information.

I agree that it's a reincarnation sort of situation, where our "dreamer" is having dreams of a past life. Considering she's had this dream multiple times, it's likely that these "memories" are still unresolved, ie she hasn't met her lover's reincarnation yet or doesn't realize she has reunited with her. There's just too little information to formulate much else beyond "This is reincarnation shenanigans."

Hopefully a sequel will be produced where our mc finally meets their lover from a past life, both of them regain their memories, and they hook back up. Preferably within a more favorable environment for their homosexual relationship.

Since Asuka has XX chromosomes and Asuka's Dad has XY, it could be thought that Asuka has inherited the X chromosome from her dad. Since Asuka's dad got the Y from Asuka's grandfather, he should have gotten the X from Asuka's grandmother.

Therefore it's highly likely that Asuka's grandmother on her father's side would be attracted to Ayako as well.

Doing the important hard science that needs to be done. Good work, keep it coming! :D

Is no one going to point out the guy with an eye patch? Unless it's a sleep mask, in which case never mind I'm just overreacting. :P

@Nekofanatic I suppose it depends on how Tanya views their own gender and sexuality. Does Tanya see themselves as either mentally male or female? Or are they gender neutral?

From what I understand Tanya's gender identity was barely touched upon in the anime series, assuming it was at all. As such, any designation we use for Tanya should be fine simply because we don't know for sure. I'd prefer to refer to Tanya as "she," but if someone wants to refer to Tanya as "they" or "he" they wouldn't necessarily be wrong.

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When considering what Tanya was before her reincarnation, I feel like this could actually happen in the story. Would it be too much to assume this will end up canon? :3

Also, if Being X set this up then they instantly get hundreds of brownie points from me! If this ended up being the true motive for Being X then I'd support them wholeheartedly! :D

Furthermore, Tanya looks awesome in a tux. Sure, they looked cute in that red dress from before, but Tanya looks so much better in sophisticated men's clothing due to their natural charisma.

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This bathroom shtick is rubbing me the wrong way. I hope that manager dies

Jesus.

Christ.

Vampire Hunter.

Part 2

I just looked up Jesus Christ Vampire Hunter, and I gotta say that synopsis is both hilarious and stupid beyond belief. I have half a mind to go watch it now.

Edit:
[A Girl Picking Up a Girl]
Crying Girl: Brought me here by car and left me behind...
Nice Girl: This is Hotaru Island. Where do you live?
Crying Girl: Osaka
Nice Girl: You'd need a bus or a boat to go home.
Me: On an Island and needs a boat to get home, but was brought by car? I suppose Nice Girl did say by bus works too so maybe there's a bridge to the mainland, but still seems kinda suspicious.

Edit 2:
(Following chapters)
I knew there was something fishy. Nice to know Chapter 28 ended amicably at least, despite Yuki threatening to blackmail her savior. Still wondering why Yuki doesn't have any money. Is she a runaway, perhaps?

Edit 3: Oh, she's the sister of that molester. Didn't' realize till other commentators pointed it out. Maybe her sister has all the money and because she got separated she now doesn't have money? Or maybe Yuki's sister doesn't know she followed her and planned on using her excuse of not having money to force her sister to keep Yuki around?

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Sun Jing is 5'9... she's taller than me by 2 inches. I feel kinda short now. :I

If I just consider the joke itself, the punchline really comes from the fact that Sanda seemed like the cool senpai (she even smokes) and she was even completely dignified while proposing for kouhai to move in with her. (Also I just now realized that kouhai's name is a mystery. Weird.)

But if we look for the justification of the joke, as you did, it can also be considered a more subtle implication of the atmosphere where society assumes queer people don't exist, than the "but we're both girls" line. Sanda may have let her guard down in this sense because she didn't consider the romantic implications, as she was talking to a girl.

It would be refreshing if this weren't the reason why she didn't realize the implications of her proposition, but we have no evidence for that. For example, she didn't seem socially inept in any of the previous panels. But I also prefer the subconscious romantic feelings interpretation, even if it takes a bit more reasoning, as the story is right now.

I would like to see more from these two. Mochi often touches on previously unexplored niche territories within the yuri genre, and this is one of those cases.

You make a valid point. I complete failed to acknowledge the societal ideologies Sanda might be influenced by. I guess my own preferences simply blocked the ideology of "queer people don't exist" because I'm of the ideology that everyone should be gay. Well, that everyone should be female and gay, but then there's the situation of how are they to reproduce. There are some ideas that come to mind, but this isn't the place for that i suppose. :P

Since people are having trouble interpreting the last page:
Reimu, upon seeing the Christmas tree, goes wide-eyed, realizing the life she's been living is a lie and coming to embrace Jesus as her Lord and savior; then then hugs Marisa as a platonic thank you for showing her the Truth. Marisa, still believing Reimu to be a pagan, is now worried over Satan using stupid sexy Reimu to lure her into the gay.

That's definitely an interesting way to interpret the story. I for one am all for Satan corrupting Marisa and pulling her into the gay. Give in Marisa! You know you want to! :D

is it even yuri? I see nothing but shoujo ai tho

Same thing. Yuri is the original and official term for all girlxgirl stuff. From what I recall, shoujo ai is just a term coined by the west to signify a lesbian relationship that focuses more on the platonic and "chaste" type of relationship while outright avoiding the explicit and steamy lesbian realtionships. If we were to go by western standards, then Strawberry Panic would probably be considered shoujo ai as most of the relationships there are sisterly and "chaste," with characters kissing and hugging each other but nothing more. That is, assuming I'm remembering Strawberry Panic correctly. Been years since I last watched the anime adaption.

With that said, if you look at the tags that are present on Dynasty you'll notice a "shoujo ai" tag doesn't exist. If this one-shot did need another tag then it might need the subtext tag as there isn't any obvious yuri. There's implied yuri, and depending on how you want to interpret this you could even say there's a yuri crush that the teacher has on her student. Course, I think yuri crush might be stretching it a bit, so perhaps keeping the yuri tag where it is would be best and just add the subtext tag next to it.

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RIP robot. You will be missed.

Chito smelling Yuuri's clothes though!

Also: "After this they practiced like crazy?" Does this mean what I think it means? :D

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I understand that mistakes happen or things get overlooked when one draws, but the way Reimu's eyes are drawn on the second panel of page 3 makes her look extremely silly and zoned out! Kinda feels like she should be drooling as well. I couldn't help but laugh at that. :P

Regardless, this was cute and I quite liked it.

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