This story is actually... really fucking boring. The MC's are so bland and the conflict is non-existent.

There is lots of conflict actually. One is trying to become an adult and shed her previous ways. Her nature has caused her friends to move away from her. The other girl has been in love with someone she use to punch out on the regular and is trying to begin a relationship with that person. Finally.

I actually like conflict free stories as much as ones with it. It can be refreshing and enjoyable if the author can keep it interesting.

It's fine if you don't like it or find them boring though. I find lots of lead characters boring. I just don't agree with your second statement.

last edited at Nov 11, 2018 8:18AM

don't you folks mean a-social? anti-social is a personality disorder isn't it?
Anyway. Great short chapter. That was updated "3 weeks" late. There for it was delinquent! to answer that other persons comment.

And there it is! The finish line! What a piece! lived up to all its tags. Very interesting characters. Rough tale. And an ending that laves me actually rather hopeful in a way. thanks for translating team!

I wonder if I can listen to those songs mentioned on the second to last page . . .I think last time I tried I kept running into copy right take downs. >-<

last edited at Nov 7, 2018 7:29AM

Quite good. They really were a fun pair on the show. Actually the only think I liked about the show to be honest.

Wow. That escalated . . . was just thinking about this issue today. How do we have all this technology and still have no good solution to this? Why couldn't that jmanga, I think it was called, thing take off? I supported it. It died before I even got to purchase much on it.

last edited at Nov 4, 2018 9:15PM

that was BOSS! I love werewolves. This would have been terrific even without that element! It did move a little fast and I wish it was a bit more show then tell but other than that. Great story!

last edited at Nov 1, 2018 4:33PM

This was really good!

I don't see why this needed to be longer. This. Was well done. I just . . . don't need it to be longer to understand what happened or to feel for the character. Or to get the point. but I respect the differing opinions on the matter.

Why did this story need to be told at all has me a bit more preoccupied. It's something we know about it. Yet here it is again. Told a different way. And that endless reminder of how this incident ruined a friendship with the friend not even knowing fully what caused it? (I'm actually getting pretty damn angry right now!)

It's a freaking sucks. I hate that anyone has to go though this and put themselves back together. Fuck rapists. There aren't enough words to express what I think of you pieces of shit.

It's a very straightforward inversion of the "high school makeover" formula, but I am enjoying it more and more.

Also: Girl Friends But They Hate Each Other

l-l-lord Bison?!!
I feel foolish for saying this but I did not expect to see you here. My apologies. Clearly The Dictator is a man of culture!

Well. This is still a real good read.
why can't the chapters go on forever?

Fujishiro has no friends but still has a social media following huh? I know it's not the same thing. Just though it was interesting. Her pushiness really is a treat to watch. I think with all we have on her we don't have much reason to think it'll be too much.

Kanadae looks pretty cool in several of the shots of her head with the googles!

"flipping" though these pages again makes me want another chapter so badly!

magnificent!

I like the picture. no idea what these comments are on about. pretty sure the artist depicts characters which ever way they like. popular or not. Edit. Well I do see it in her eyes on this one. but this narrative being applied to every single pic is getting to me.

last edited at Oct 16, 2018 4:30AM

Oh lord I really hope this doesn’t go like in the oneshot, they’re so cute and the sense of melancholy distance would fuck me up, can we get some realistic lesbians with a happy ending in this world? Is that too much to ask? I almost feel a sense of dread getting attached to these characters.

I'm fine with that. I honestly hardly ever care if the characters in a story end up together forever. What I want, more often than not, is a story that makes me believe they go together. Or if they don't, then one that explains why they don't go together.

I can’t stand Saeko, but I don’t know really why. I would rather see an ending where it’s the other way around, where Miwa finds someone else first and Saeko sees them in public

She's quite a character, no? Doesn't seem like she jives with everyone she meets. Or even everyone who reads this story!

I like the pacing.
Interesting how Miwa's first kiss didn't line up with the expectations she had when she was younger.
This has been a real good read.

Interesting. Accidentally read ch 4 first. >-<. Interesting none the less!

This wasn't too bad. I stand by what I said about the author needing to tell the story in a way those not into fighters can enjoy.
I disagree with those saying fighters make a bad topic though. It can be done. It just needs to be done a certain way. I wanna give it a shot if I ever get my art and writing skills up! woo!

I'm no fan of cutesy moe art. It's something I put up this in a lot of yuri.The anatomy here was even more disturbing through out. I actually did like the art for the fighters at times.

There were a few interesting quirks revealed along the way. Like one character not liking fireworks because the sound comes at a time different from when you see the flare.

the end result for the rivalry was handled better than I thought it would be.

honestly, these comments are sickening me. bet most people that read this story, never actually tried to get good at fighting games. Like, REALLY tried to get good. why they explained it so much? so that you can understand the hardships and the skill you have to need to be good. you can relate better and get exited when you know what its about. even if you never played a fighting game. and it did. i didnt learn anything new but it was all the same stuff i had to learn when i started playing fighting games. its on point. You sadly need to know about frames and mixups, so you can understand the growth. too bad, most yuri readers just give a fuck about kissing and scissoring and forgot how yuri even began forming. with subtext. this wouldve been an awesome story. an epic story. all the shoujo ai at EVO, handholding, suki suki with blushing i dont know. it wouldve been great. if not for stupid yuri hime readers and you guys even. underappreciated work.
rest in peace, hope to see you one day again.

how can you speak on behalf of those that that don't understand fighting games and those that do at the same time? (then making assumptions about people based their depth their favorite genre?) It's the authors job to tell a story people want to hear in a way they want to hear it. Throwing jargon at them pretty much never goes over well. There is a better way and this author should have figured it out.

I'm actually behind on this series. Since I only come here for yuri i think I missed the updates when the yuri tag was removed. Just wanted to get an idea how it was going from the comments. Will catch up when I have time.

Did I mention I had an idea for yuri involving fighting games? It wouldn't have went with the oh-so-relatable prodigy that goes on to win the biggest tournament in the world. Just a local or something.

@Omega Deuse
agreed

Well! Ok then. Interesting turn towards the end there. Very interested in what happens next.

She was going to eat her right? Must be hard to get a meal of they keep falling in love with you.

I recommend reading Ani no Yome to Kurashite Imasu, a looooooot better, similar theme but slice of life, not yuri or het yet (maybe never) and the husband died.

You had me at the "husband died" brb reading that now

That's f**ked up

I guess the author has a jumbled ideas that couldn't create a better plot line. Every chapter is always away from supposed to be the plot. Of course, I saw other story made it like that and it's fine but w/ this story it's kinda annoying tbh. tMnr probably not sure where this story going to, so just keep prolonging, putting another drama, until she gets what she's going to do to Uta and Kaoru.

I think I have a fairly high tolerance for side stories I guess. There is only two(from the same author) that I felt started to get ridiculous with the amount of side characters that were being covered. No wait. Three. but in the later case it got back on track after not too long end ended well.

Also: am I the only one kinda thinking it's not healthy for Kaoru to develop feelings for a girl she has seen grow up? It would be different if she didn't see Uta as a child, but she has...

that seems to be one of those things . . . where I have to say yes in all honesty. I've seen it in fiction and heard about it happening in real life. So on paper I'd say yes but then if we look at it from, I donno how to say it, the fact that it's just possible to be romantically attracted to anyone no mater what what their gender is, let alone the fact that the reached adulthood later than you, or vice versa, whether you knew them all that time or not, then I have to technically say . . . no.

last edited at Sep 25, 2018 3:48PM

Finally caught up on this series. I hate Kaoru already, she is so bland and boring, and so is Uta. Can Miyagi and Kuro be the MCs? I don't understand, is it just me or side characters in these stories tend to be the actual interesting people? (Bloom Into You excluded, since Yuu is freaking awesome)

After reading the comments I actually find the leads in this more interesting than I did previously.(bland or not there is a LOT going on with them) I honestly can't say I find myself shipping them but It feels like their is a good chance in all this chaos that they could end up together. (may only seem that way to me since I'm not really rooting for it)

I do often find side characters more interesting but there seems to be a number of reasons for that I've seen mentioned before. One point I often hear is lead character are made to have broad appeal so they tend to be relatable to as many as people as possible. I try to bear this in mind while b*tching about lead characters. Often fail!

The second is that this since people may not care about the side characters, they author can go nuts with them.

This story gets hell-a reaction out of you all. I don't even have time to read all the comments since my last one. bummer.
I feel like I missed something with the side couple. I thought it was going one way but eh. Looks like imma need to re-read.

rages And who's bright Idea was it to upload new chapters to almost every yuri I enjoy all at once! Let me know!
. . . So I can thank you!

I guess I'm just not invested enough to feel the angst of the lead character. Not great stuff is happening but . . . yeah. I'll say more once I get a chance to re-read.

last edited at Sep 24, 2018 4:22PM

awesome. Thanks Marie!