Waiting

I give this a Kodomo no Jikan/10

https://i.imgur.com/eaqfPjY.jpg

Also holy shit rare Pepe

last edited at Mar 21, 2018 2:41PM by Nezchan

... Dammit, I'm so envious of Nanoha for having listened to Fate's song when we readers are unable to perceive it!

One of the sweetest Masulao doujins, we need to make this a drama cd or OVA with Nana singing this song.

That song, PHANTOM MINDS, is real. Feito-chan's seiyuu, Mizuki Nana, sings it. It's the ED for the first Nanoha movie. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fiSLlg6rFtM

I saw the "Phantom minds" on page 10 and I was like "AAAAHHHH THAT'S GOING TO BE THE FIRST SONG ALLUDED TO IN THE TITLE AND THE MEMORIES ARE FLOODING BACK". I must have listened to this song a thousand times so it was quite an experience to follow the lyrics Masulao copied into the doujin while listening to the actual song.

Anyways, Nanoha is great, Feito-chan is great, NanoFate is great, Mizuki Nana is great, it's all fuckin' great! As a Feito-chan fan and a Mizuki Nana fan it would've been great to see an AMV of Feito-chan singing it or something like that.

last edited at Mar 2, 2018 1:39AM

Azuma Yukihiko isn't quite as prominent as Ooshima Tomo but they deliver pretty good shit too when it comes to PreCure. This is an unexpected but really nice collaboration.

last edited at Feb 28, 2018 6:54PM

All according to keikaku

"Was getting caught part of your keikaku?"

Kuune Rin is a solid one. Heh.

Seems a little lo...oh.

The name reminds me of another yuri incest book with the same name. On Dynasty its title was just translated: https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/together_with_my_big_sister

last edited at Feb 17, 2018 1:43AM

Blondie is pretty hard to like, huh?

I've seen worse half of Mochi's recent stuff

I want their future already. :P

I seem to recall a quote about writing that went something along the lines of: 'if you're not writing about the most interesting time of your character's life, then write about that instead.'

I've seen too many moe slice of life anime and manga (even doujins, really) to think that this kind of writing doesn't work in anime and manga.

last edited at Feb 13, 2018 12:36AM

Chicks dig giant robots

NICE.

Megas XLR. That brings me back.

Also this one was so cringeworthy I am not sure it had anywhere to go.

Really? Huh, I guess I've been so desensitized by Mochi's cringe I didn't think this was even that bad.

Mochi has a sister ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Should asked her sister for reference instead.

And that would be a catapult into another incest yuri story, which Mochi loves so much ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Ping Pong Porn? What a time to be alive.

I have thought too much about doujinshi over 8 or so years of reading them. Frequently I'll think "this one was too short" and make a mental count of all the pages, accounting for covers, forewards, afterwards, etc., so I thought this chapter did give interesting insight into how doujinshi is made.

Also page 160 "girls normally grope each other's boobs as penalty games" was pretty funny.

really tempted to recolor her throwing up with rainbows.

In hindsight... of course Arisa's barf would have sparkles coming out of it.

I wonder if they will make this story diverge from the movie's, like they did with the previous movie manga.

Well it's being advertised as a side story, so I'm thinking this will be more of StrikerS manga fare. Since they ran out of space/time in the main thing to do additional character development they'll do it here. Like the next issue is Kyrie meeting Iris as a kid.

Also I have the feeling that this translation is not very accurate in some parts, but this is a new group so there's room for improvement.

Well, I never claimed to be great, buuut since noone was going to translate this...In any case, I'm interested, which part do you think was most problematic from the accuracy standpoint. I'm interested.

Good on ya to be open to suggestions.

Like I said before, try not to put stuff like translation notes and snarky comments in the manga.

About that "Tonkatsu" "Soba" "Donburi" "Tempura" sequence on page 21: you either need to translate those words or leave them alone. Don't half-ass it by putting the words in quotation marks and giving a TL note for 3 out of the 4.

You also need to break this up into two parts.

Hot take: translators should leave their snarky comments in the comments section or credits page at the end of wherever they want to post their translations, and not directly on the pages of their translations.

last edited at Feb 5, 2018 12:46AM

CITRON (Yamada Ako) and Fukuya (Tama II) are two of my favorite Madoka artists. A winning duo.

The nurse is never, never in. If that nurse series in Sono Hanabira is any indication, we all know the nurses are always just off getting yuri themselves.

Also, I never noticed Homu's ear ornament had no piercing. It's odd she would be too afraid to pierce her ears, considering she could heal her eyesight long before getting her Akuma powers. I'd imagine she could numb, or even reverse, the piercing at will.

Where the hell did "Johannes" come from? I'm not super into Sunshine so I thought it was another chuuni name until I googled it and got nothing.

Edit: well shite. I thought it was either another chuuni name or some hilarious "translation" of Yohane.

last edited at Jan 18, 2018 2:39AM

It's no secret that y/urine is closely connected to yuri.

Reminds me of the poor guy who started the "Yuri Nation" blog.

Also, I'm shocked it took until 2017 for someone to finally make a yuri piss game using that pun, "Yurinate". It was pissy as fuck but I felt it wasn't yuri enough

Jail baits for short.

I think Kodama is over 40 years old, ma'am.

Maybe they meant "kodomo"

Most people, like Norainhere, say Deen's F/SN wasn't any good.

Everyone says "read the fucking visual novel" but I got bored of it about 15 minutes in. Then I blasted through Fate/Zero and it's still the best anime I've ever watched. But I still want to get through the VN before watching ufotable's Fate/stay night stuff.

I was just re-reading this and realized the guy who commissioned this scanlation's called "runareo". And if that's a reference to the two blond lolis in Sono Hanabira, well then this commission makes perfect sense.