I mean, Moose and Lion are holding hands. Who knows what that type of PDA could do to those fragile young minds!

KaguMoko being romantic as always. Just look at how happy they are!

Maitake's hilarious as always, though I think that Homura love pyramid took the cake for this one. Poor Mami...

Also, ever since the PSP game where Hitomi got a crush on Homura I've been kinda craving some HitoHomu.

It even kinda makes sense lore wise, since (from my understanding) Helena has more or less having an alien fetish and Altera is an ancient alien super-weapon created to eat and destroy all sentient life on Earth. It's a match made in heaven!

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This is weirdly really sweet yet also somewhat sad. While everything and everyone that Mai and Satono used to know are long gone, they still have each other and thus are happy.

YamaParu continues to be a good ship. I especially liked Parsee's face on the last panel of this page, where she seriously didn't expect Yamame to take initiative like that.

The best way to pick up girls - get them to read your porn!

So if I understand this correctly, this doujin is taking the theory that Sumireko is Renko as opposed to just being her ancestor. That's pretty interesting actually, and I could see how that makes sense with Renko being a college-age Sumireko who's forgotten her times in Gensokyo. It also explains why Yukari looked sad when she sent her back to the Outside World, assuming that Yukari is a future Maribel.

Well the afterword was pretty amusing lol.

"I don't want to draw dicks."

You have to admire the purity and simplicity of that motive, lol.

A+ reasoning right here. Actually, this doujin was surprisingly sweet. Happy sex is A+ as well!

This is a very silly Dorem. Does anyone know if this comic is part of a larger collection of “Detective Doremy” stories?

Another fun read from this author. Sanae and Sumireko have a lot of potential bantering and interactions that I'd love to see more of. Also MariMokou is fun too.

Actually, just how old is Sanae? Sanae first appeared in Mountain of Faith back in 2007 (wow it's been a while). Assuming she was a highschooler of around 15-18 when she arrived in Gensokyo, she was born around 1989-1992, and is now 25-28 as of 2017 - assuming she didn't simply stop aging/age slower due to being in Gensokyo and/or because of her partial divinity. That would also mean the game system she was playing here was probably a Playstation 2, maybe a 3.

Here's today's pointless over-analyzation from yours truly!

This was fun. Mokou and Marisa do seem like they'd get along pretty well.

This isn't the first time the left girl's seen lewd yuri doujins

Also, fun fact - the two girls pictured in the doujin are sisters. Truly, these are Mochi's comrades/disciples!

Something something “ripe with the stench of bitches” ironically enough Remi isn’t here though

Also I like how Yuuka just gave Reimu a flower while Yuyuko is eating her hair tube

This seems like the birth of a sadist. Here’s hoping the story (if it does continue and isn’t a series of one shots) doesn’t get too serious and drama-filled. I personally really like light-hearted teasing/flirting types of stories.

Kosu x Mami reversal? Sign me up

Still confused on what exactly happened. It's a decent pairing with potential but needs a bit of work. I didn't quite get how they got to love hotel status right after Satori exposed her mind reading ability and Sumi was embarrassed. Maybe that's why Koishi came in and told Satori to first start out as friends?

That's something I was confused about as well. Like I said, they escalated way too quickly.

Actually, I could see why that would happen - both of them have no idea how to go about dating, so going straight to a hotel on their first meeting is something both assumed would normally happen. I think that's implied with page 23 as well, when Sumireko saw a similarly aged girl going out with some old guy (apparently, that sort of thing happens in Japane? Gross.). That'd be why Koishi showed up at the end, to help Satori through with Sumireko when she appeared again.

The author probably could've done a better job of portraying all of that though, as it's mostly speculation on my part.

Wow, this escalated quickly.

Things I liked:
* Rarepairing!
* A work that features Sumireko!
* Satori really was cute (at least in the first half of the work), being so nervous and embarrassed before putting on a cool front for Sumireko. It seems like she wanted to appear like she's in control and composed, which is why she didn't tell Sumireko that this was a first time for her too.
* Koishi's comforting her sister at the end, as well as her "You should start out as friends", which I'll go into next.
* The sad chibi Koishi waiting for her sister and happy chibi Rin congratulating Satori for finally getting a date, both in the credits.
* Art was pretty nice overall

What I didn't like:
* Why is it that so many stories have the couple having sex (or about to, in this case) right after meeting each other? This part is why I liked Koishi's line at the end.
* The narrative would've done better to show Satori's nervousness more in front of Sumireko, or at least have it show her hiding her nervousness.
* A bit of a disappointing ending, with Satori and Sumireko's relationship left unclear. I hope the author has a sequel to this that has them working it out.
* Overall the pacing and such was confusing, which I can see confused some other readers as well.

I liked this comic, but it could be better. Satori x Sumireko is an interesting pairing for sure though - they have being socially awkward loners in common, so I could see this ship happening. Unfortunately, this doujin didn't really go into them having that in common, so I'm sad about that.

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The real reason Okina wanted new servants - she's been their third wheel for years now.

I was wondering why the usual pictures upload was delayed - we were waiting for Halloween! In retrospect, that should have been pretty obvious...

Looks like Kuki is in need of another punishment.

Exactly what I was thinking. In before it’s revealed she did that because she was looking forward to said punishment...

Something silly that I was thinking about would be a girl who, for some reason, has to crossdress and join an all-boys school - something extremely overdone and cliche, I know. However, the one guy she falls for/ends up with turns out to be another crossdressing girl.

Preferably the story would switch between the points of views between the two girls, with them getting closer to "that one cute guy" but feeling reserved about getting into a relationship because they're trying to hide their genders and don't think the other would be interested in men. They'd find out of course (though hopefully not for too long), either at the same time or separately, and try to deny their feelings at first but give in eventually.

One reason I'd find this type of story interesting is that most if not all of the supporting cast would be male, which is definitely a rarity for yuri in general. Like, it'd be cool for both the female leads to have close male friends that they don't end up with, even if the girls are shown to be interested in guys to some degree - bisexual yuri is pretty cool. And if the guys were to find out that they were crossdressing, they'd be more or less cool about it. There'd be some teasing/flirting/awkwardness, but in the end they'd be friends regardless and later on even be supportive of the girls' relationship. Also at least one yaoi-sidecouple, though the main focus would always be on the two girls.

Genre-wise, it'd ideally be a comedy-drama with a focus on the character's thoughts and feelings and such. This would most definitely be a high-school drama type which I know a lot of people are tired of, but that's the sort of thing I like so eh. Come to think of it, depending on the reasons for why they have to crossdress and such it could have a deeper plot, like some sort of conspiracy, mystery, or other such complication, but I'm probably not creative enough to do that sort of thing well.

^ Oh, should’ve paid more attention. I’m assuming she’s running over to join the cuddle pile.

Huh, Ayaharem. That's new. Please disregard that harem rant I did in the NaruMari image! Now we're only missing Hatate from the "people Aya is commonly paired with" list.

I love that people have really picked up on this cracky, sort-of canon family. Also wouldn't a better tag for this pairing be like Nightingale x Lancer Alter? I'm assuming we're sticking with "Lancer Alter" since she's an alternate version of Saber, who goes by her class name on Dynasty as well