Pages 50-51 are awesome. Maki's entranced gaze is, well, entrancing. Those panels are just dripping with sexual tension, it's delicious.

Pretty good, though I don't think I'd of enjoyed it as much without the knowledge of there being a follow-up

Agreed, I'm excited for the sequel, this was cute but it's not enough to leave off here.

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I can't believe how many negative reviews this has gotten. I strongly disagree with those who say that Mira should 'stick with porn', and for me this is just further proof of that. I love this story.

Hadn't read this before, I really like it. Kiyoka is basically a superhero in my eyes, and Chiaki is adorable.

The best detail in this story is Chiaki's completely supportive friend.

I agree, between Kiyoka and her support, this was pretty heartwarming despite the end to Kiyoka's relationship.

i'm not sure.. but isn't "Past Heaven" the sequel of this? coz same characters and all :3

Agreed basically, however their characters become somewhat different.
(Or rather I'd consider them two separate oneshots with coincidentally similar character names and designs, since their personalities changed so much.)

I don't agree at all, the characters seem the same to me. Ayumu is still gregarious but it's revealed it's all just a front. Yuu is very confused about all these new things she's feeling & experiencing, but she's trying to come to terms with how close she feels to Ayumu all of a sudden. I don't think either is acting out of character, they're just showing sides they didn't show in the first chapter.

Anyway, I came here to mention how awesome I think the grandpa is. That guy rocks.

There are a good two or three more chapters here to this story. Kirino's gayngst & Yoshizawa's naivete, along with simply seeing them together more, are golden material for more. Great one-shot, anyhow.

I really liked this. Also, this line: "I want you to need me so much that you can't bear to be without me.". I'll be damned if that doesn't tug at the heartstrings.

Aww, that was adorable.

Kuroda-San is hilarious.

So Niki got over finding her dad by finding him, and then fucking him? Someone explain to me how that's not weird. I like this manga, but that little detail is insurmountable to me - it's just too bizarre.

I love this story. Chihiro is absolutely adorable, & the lewdness is perfect. Great combination of sexy & cute, & even a bit romantic.

I love Momono Moto. Funny, Hidden in Dusk, Kimi Koi Limit, & now this all involve stalking/peeping.

Very interesting art, I like it.

"For this desire I concluded on after much thought...this life of mine, I'll exchange it!"

Makes me want to watch Madoka: Old English Edition

Hahahaha. I didn't think about how unusual that phrasing was before.

Aww, this one is great. Tsumari's determination to confess is pretty feelsy, and then such a satisfying conclusion.

Oh wow, this is great. It seems pretty in character.

Hiroki is a terrible friend and she doesn't deserve Mana's affection

What, why? Because she's oblivious to Mana's feelings? That's Mana's fault. You can blame Hiroki for being stupid or imperceptive, but that's not really up to her.

I really liked this up until the ending, and then it just seemed like a waste. Mana is great, though. I love seeing arrogant characters falling in love. The way they change how they act around that person is always charming.

Too bad really, Chako was too lovable to only get two chapters of content.

For sure. Chako is a lovable rascal. You really don't see characters like her at all in yuri manga. I like the main two just fine, but Chako absolutely made this series. Shame to see it go.

This translation is a little hard to follow at times... damned if the story isn't hot, though.

Pg. 24: "We can't do this so suddenly... I like you."
Hahahaha. Such dialogue.
I thought it was cute, if a bit shallow.

This has always been one of my favorites. The art's a little shaky, but it's mostly fine. I love the dry sense of humor. I love the dignity Sensei carries on with. I absolutely adore the confession, one of my favorites in yuri. I love how completely Hayaka is won over by Sensei's feelings. I love the ending. Everything about this one-shot is wonderful. I've always wished there was more from this author.

The art in this one is gorgeous. Unlike a lot of yuri where a character is said to be beautiful, but actually is rather generic-looking, both the characters really are stunning in their own ways.

Leaps right up into the pantheon of best yuri one-shots, for me. You really get a good sense of how heartbroken senpai was after her breakup. That, coupled with Mei's refusal to give up on it, really made this great.

I don't really understand what Taki was thinking letting Sakura sit for a few weeks. If she intended to visit her anyway, why say 'fine'? Sakura went through a lot of torment after that. Maybe she got tired of waiting for Sakura to make it up to her, but it just seems callous to me.

Damn, this is pretty well-written. Props to Nanzaki Iku.