Comes to a sudden ending heh. I do recognize Anna had a feeling towards Reina (it's clearly showing lol), but the last chapter sounds quite abrupt to me. Is it cancelled by the manga editor so author is required to finish the story ASAP?

Other than that I have no problems at all. And I'm especially fond of the part Maggie slips in a malicious update to infect androids, which is exactly how real-world supply chain attack works on SolarWinds, Piriform and ASUSTeK: their build systems was compromised (possibly by a vulnerability in their CI/CD servers like this one in JetBrains TeamCity) and a software update laced with malware was shipped to their customers. Did the author actually looked it up just to write this part?

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that was really interesting! pacing could have used some work, but i liked the plot and setting a lot. ending honestly just felt like how nanoha always ended its seasons: central conflict tied up, antagonists befriended or neutralized/allied... it's a very neat way of wrapping things up, but in exchange it doesn't leave much impact. i think all in all it works though, at least for me. solid 7/10

i haven't checked also, but im guessing this was a web manga? the art is rough in places, so im guessing this was an indie project and story the artist just really wanted to share. kinda inspiring tbh, i need to follow their example