Is that the author that did the super long HimaSaku doujin series? Because I have literally seen nobody except that author make up a smelling fetish for Hima (and now Saku too??). Weird.
Ok, red eyes and she’s reaching for...? This is drawn very well, the woman with red eyes is in the shadows trying to reach for her companion. The crucifix seems to be holding her back, I’m not sure. She does seem to be taking care not to disturb the crucifix or treat it with respect while getting her partner in the mood.
(3rd place!) Good job with shading and lighting. Bilateral line should have more lines drawn in and cross lines for abs... but that would have been hell for shading all those muscles.