That was almost a really nice book, the middle part didn't seem quite in tone with the rest of the book. I loved the art tho, Tenshi has never looked so cute.
Edit:
Seems it's not as easy as cutting out the middle part, what's happening after that point lol. Why is Reimu acting like a lunatic. Well it seems from the note of the author he was afriad that this doujin had too much talking and not enough action, so he was probably trying to spice things up, even though it was unnecessary as the dialogue was strong enough to carry this.
On page 21, is that the aftermath of Tenhsi and Reimu having casual sex? Partly page 21 and 22 is essentialy pillow talk, altough it's frontporch talk, what a shameless miko.
Edit:
Here is my "Cohesive Flow" fanedit of sort for curious persons: https://mega.nz/#!wFwThIxQ!0oA5Qj6NEgvmcdnX-sft2L0IA5terJFDFUKxJpRWltk
It was a little bit more work then I thought it would be, but it was a fun little project.
last edited at Mar 16, 2019 11:24AM
