Meh

WHAT DO U MEAN MEH

Impressive observations

It's amusing how obvious it is that this porn artist is either unwilling or unable to draw a vagina

Otherwise meh

Sex with Clothes had they charm.

What's with that pose? https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/darchovy#17 also the censured vaginas was somehow annoying cause it was akways the damn hand lol.

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https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/darchovy#11 tfw the artist can't draw boobs

No one's said anything yet about the very questionable shape and utility of that aphrodisiac bottle! It's, uh, questionable and suspect.

I mean I like both of the characters so I should be able to like this...

something felt off to me - like it was too fast moving

minor error on pg 16 was fixed

While folks above complain about drawing issues and weird poses, I find dialogue part to be hilarious.
Like dispute about what nationality is: where were you born (Japan, for everyone in GuP) or what culture you were taught in the school? (Italy or Britain in this case)
Or very important lesson from Assam and Rosehip: "dishonourment" doesn't count between girls (still it's important to ask first before going into full D-Day style offensive)
So, weak visuals but interesting ideas, I guess