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joined Oct 5, 2013

With a title like memories of her you can't help but think its gonna be a sad ending XD

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joined Jan 2, 2014

With a title like memories of her you can't help but think its gonna be a sad ending XD

Yeah I was worried about that too good thing I was wrong

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

Porn aside, Asagi Ryuu has this real gift for communicating a sense of the environment. The heat of the day, the cool of the evening and so on. There aren't really that many authors who do it so well, it's a shame that skill gets lost among the ever-increasing bodily fluids in his work.

Plus, he tends to be one of the more romance-oriented porn authors which certainly makes his stuff more readable.

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joined Oct 15, 2013

Porn aside, Asagi Ryuu has this real gift for communicating a sense of the environment. The heat of the day, the cool of the evening and so on. There aren't really that many authors who do it so well, it's a shame that skill gets lost among the ever-increasing bodily fluids in his work.

Plus, he tends to be one of the more romance-oriented porn authors which certainly makes his stuff more readable.

From an artistic point of view (strictly artistic), even if his style is not something I like, his art is probably the best I've seen on this site.
- Great backgrounds, greatly detailed most of the time, helps with the next 2 points below.
- Environment is perfectly communicated (as you pointed out)
- Even atmosphere (check: http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_fell_in_love_for_the_first_time_ch03#3 That moment where you can say "thats their moment, their moment alone, just for them")
- Some angled shots on the characters look GLORIOUS
- Characters posing (this comes off as weird when irl ppl aren't posing like that, but it is drawn perfectly)
- When characters are all over each other they don't like like flat images overlapping (many mangakas fail at this... so many...).

If only the porn wasn't so... porn-ish... lol.

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

Well, it's not all great since he sometimes has issues with scale, making characters much bigger and smaller in comparison to each other. That gets even more so when he's doing age gap. This one's not too bad, but there are moments in I Fell In Love For the First Time I thought I was reading a Yuugi x Parsee doujin.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_fell_in_love_for_the_first_time_ch03#27

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

Well, it's not all great since he sometimes has issues with scale, making characters much bigger and smaller in comparison to each other. That gets even more so when he's doing age gap. This one's not too bad, but there are moments in I Fell In Love For the First Time I thought I was reading a Yuugi x Parsee doujin.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_fell_in_love_for_the_first_time_ch03#27

Doesn't happen much on his other age-gap / student teacher stuff
Doesn't happen on this one http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/distant_evening_mist
IIRC it doesnt happen in http://dynasty-scans.com/series/i_want_to_be_honest either. Not sure tho.

I have only taken a glance at his other stuff, I just... don't feel like going into those... So I duno if this character scaling mistake is frequent.

Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

Well, it's not all great since he sometimes has issues with scale, making characters much bigger and smaller in comparison to each other. That gets even more so when he's doing age gap. This one's not too bad, but there are moments in I Fell In Love For the First Time I thought I was reading a Yuugi x Parsee doujin.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_fell_in_love_for_the_first_time_ch03#27

Is not really a scale problem, is just that Hitomi's really tall and Yui's more petite. That difference is maintained on every panoramic shot between them.

Having said that, he's one of my top yuri artists, his art is gorgeous and his stories are filled with genuine love (and they're also connected, always a plus)

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

Well, it's not all great since he sometimes has issues with scale, making characters much bigger and smaller in comparison to each other. That gets even more so when he's doing age gap. This one's not too bad, but there are moments in I Fell In Love For the First Time I thought I was reading a Yuugi x Parsee doujin.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_fell_in_love_for_the_first_time_ch03#27

Is not really a scale problem, is just that Hitomi's really tall and Yui's more petite. That difference is maintained on every panoramic shot between them.

Having said that, he's one of my top yuri artists, his art is gorgeous and his stories are filled with genuine love (and they're also connected, always a plus)

Eh, I accept that, except in most shots Yui comes at least up to Hitomi's shoulder, but in others she's almost a foot shorter, barely coming up to Hitomi's breasts. At times it makes her look gigantic.

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joined Jun 25, 2016

Cute O///O

I guess girl Io left eri at some point given the title, some narration, and the look on hiroko's face at the end.

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joined Oct 25, 2010

I find that I enjoy reading this artist’s works! The artwork is beautiful and the words paint pictures in my mind! I enjoy this author’s works very much!

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