This is really good now, and has some lol moments but I'm torn between hoping for a happy ending that somehow feels like it's not going to come... The process of love is always interesting whether robots or normal humans in stories.
And who's that girl at the end? One of their classmates perhaps?
That's Shouko's ... servant/secretary? You know, the one who takes care of the mess their master makes. She helped cover up the messes during their previous dates and guards Shouko( as part of the Saijou Group prob.)
Anyway, so far it looks promising. I don't like how fast they ended up in the bed though. I'm not big fan of "we just met and kinda hit it off so let's have sex" attitude. I wish there was little more character and relationship development before that, but I can overlook that.
This kind of things happens often in real life but i understand what you feel.
I was thinking the same thing. Single adults going clubbing are prepared, or expect, for that kind of thing to happen (an eventual one-night stand). That she'd hit it off with a woman makes it more interesting.
At least, we were spared the "she has such long eyelashes, she smells nice, kyun~ (what the hell was that?), bu-bu-but we are both girls, etc." antics. Emi just went with the flow and it's not like she hated it.
In total agreement Nya-chan. You are also forgetting the next morning's freak out as well. Kinda glad this didn't take that annoying turn.
well, that escalated quickly
And yet, it didn't feel rushed. From a story-telling perspective, that take skill. Nor do we get that angsty, "OMG, what have I done?!? I need some distance now," cliché that usually follows a first chapter bedding.