Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

Look I'll stick with this one, but the moment it pulls out wibbly wobbly timey wimey shenanigans that make the story incomprehensibly hard to follow, I'm out.

Hrrrm. Yeah, it's kinda fun, but feels a bit too arbitrary wacky. Eh, first chapter. Let's see what it does with the idea ...

Seems cute, let's see where this goes.

"I'm writing a story about time travel, what should I name the female character from the future? Hmm, "Future" has a nice ring to it" - approximately every mangaka who has ever written about time travel

This is a cute concept. I'm wondering if the original Kosaka "went missing" because she invented time travel and left her own time unannounced, which could set her up to visit later for Shenanigans.

Or, once she finishes doing the things that made her mark on history, she just retires quietly to the future with her wife and child.

Or, once she finishes doing the things that made her mark on history, she just retires quietly to the future with her wife and child.

Yeah, my money's also on her going to the future at the end.

Ohh my gosshhh another yuri story with a kid. I still refuse to be a mom myself but I am looking forward to seeing more of this story!

Making her float a little was very smart, or else she would totally feel like a scam and that would be awkward.... I wonder what other things she can do

"I'm writing a story about time travel, what should I name the female character from the future? Hmm, "Future" has a nice ring to it" - approximately every mangaka who has ever written about time travel

And Kako means past.

"I'm writing a story about time travel, what should I name the female character from the future? Hmm, "Future" has a nice ring to it" - approximately every mangaka who has ever written about time travel

And Kako means past.

and Nozomi is "Hope".
The hope between past and future. On the nose much? lol

Look I'll stick with this one, but the moment it pulls out wibbly wobbly timey wimey shenanigans that make the story incomprehensibly hard to follow, I'm out.

I'm find it incomprehensibly hard to follow without the wibbly wobbly timey wimey weeping angels.

She's totally going to time travel to the future and that's why her body was never found. Maybe she invented it.

Interesting and cute. Im in!

"I'm writing a story about time travel, what should I name the female character from the future? Hmm, "Future" has a nice ring to it" - approximately every mangaka who has ever written about time travel

And Kako means past.

and Nozomi is "Hope".
The hope between past and future. On the nose much? lol

Nozomi means wish

Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking.

Cute but nothing groundbreaking describes swap swap too. And it was glorious

this ain't swap swap 2 but it'll do

tomekichi doing something absolutely ridiculous although the base premise isn't that crazy yet again

It's the details that really elevate their work...
Like, this could be a normal(?) time traveling soulmate thing, but instead it's... she becomes God and gets killed by a JRPG party in the future or something but because she was God she made iPS cell pregnancies possible and her corpse was harvested for God Genes and the baby will become the New Messiah or something maybe, I dunno. Just a bit of wild thinking. Teehee

Tokemichi the GOAT :)

Nozomi means wish

The dictionary says "wish, desire, hope".

Holy shit its the author of Swap Swap!?

Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

so the story wasn’t bad for a first chapter, but you needed to day some bad about the story anyway! the majority of the Yuri stories aren’t “groundbreaking” in the LEAST, do you remind every one that every time you read a story?

it will had been something else if some one was praising the story to hell and back so you can remind them this ain’t “groundbreaking”

Making her float a little was very smart, or else she would totally feel like a scam and that would be awkward.... I wonder what other things she can do

Didn't she just toss her in the air and immediately catch her again? Not sure it was actual levitation...

Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

so the story wasn’t bad for a first chapter, but you needed to day some bad about the story anyway! the majority of the Yuri stories aren’t “groundbreaking” in the LEAST, do you remind every one that every time you read a story?

it will had been something else if some one was praising the story to hell and back so you can remind them this ain’t “groundbreaking”

I realize that the overabundance of entertainment today has skewed an average person's perception of what's worth engaging with, but is there really a point in getting angry over what amounts to a "well, it's ok" comment?

Didn't she just toss her in the air and immediately catch her again? Not sure it was actual levitation...

's what I thought too but that wouldn't be unrealistic and she keeps floating on the next page.

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Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

so the story wasn’t bad for a first chapter, but you needed to day some bad about the story anyway! the majority of the Yuri stories aren’t “groundbreaking” in the LEAST, do you remind every one that every time you read a story?

it will had been something else if some one was praising the story to hell and back so you can remind them this ain’t “groundbreaking”

I realize that the overabundance of entertainment today has skewed an average person's perception of what's worth engaging with, but is there really a point in getting angry over what amounts to a "well, it's ok" comment?

Oh the confusion on the comment section for reviewers who use 5/10 as 'average' instead of 8/10