pg 8, “we got going” shouldnt that be “get going”
pg 14, “you’ll turn into a cow you sleep after you eat” I think “if” is missing after “cow”.

I thought it was Edytha and Waltrud from BraveWitches on the backcover, can't quite rememeber who they really are, I thought the smaller one was Erica's sister, but doesn't she also have blond hair, I'm lost.
Anyway, really sweet story in a funny way, Erica's charm is a little special.