I really like how Carcharias takes one of the most cliche and most used plots possible, "Satori's eye goes missing/stops working, and has to learn to deal with it with the help of her pets", and goes in the most opposite direction possible. The parodies on pages 5 and 6 are perfect.
The various transformations of Satori are a pleasure to see. Parsee Satori! Okuu Satori! I really want to see Unzan Satori now.
Carcharias's love of yuri is showing. Now I want a Reisen x Ichirin (aka the most crack thing ever) doujin. Considering how much they love yuri, it's amazing they haven't done a yuri doujin yet.
Shame the translation is so dodgy. All it needs is a small proofreading.