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joined Feb 22, 2023

I know it’s such a common trope in romantic fiction but the idea of storming off out of someone’s house for no reason seems completely baffling to me, like it’s not even a fight from their perspective they were answering a question about their past and the person suddenly shouted and bolted out the house, I’d be very weirded out

it's so strange and would have to be really fast for it to make any sense

joined Feb 22, 2023

yeah something's definitely missing. in the release post there's another page

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

This was unsatisfying due to the unresolved end. Was this an on-off encounter, or are they going to continue cheating in the future?

i think you can use your imagination for this one

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

i need more

joined Feb 22, 2023

10/10

joined Feb 22, 2023

cant say ive ever heard it said like that

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

did the chapter get taken down? why?

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

what an ally...

joined Feb 22, 2023

Advice to HS lesbians: This isn't your grandmother's day when the ideal girlfriend was a cute, clumsy girl with animal ears who called you Onee-san. No, these are modern times. You should look for girls whose eyes each take up a third of their faces. These wide-eyed cuties are just waiting to be claimed. Before you know it, you'll hear their confused innocent voice saying "How did our clothes come off, Sempai???"

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GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

?

it's a metaphor

joined Feb 22, 2023

am i getting deja vu?

Might have read it over on MD? I saw it was there on front page recent updates and well and far ahead of what's been submitted to Dynasty.

ahhh yeah thats probably it

joined Feb 22, 2023

am i getting deja vu?

joined Feb 22, 2023

oh come the fuck on

joined Feb 22, 2023

death due to horny supplement

joined Feb 22, 2023

the "plot" adds a lot of unintentional comedy

it adds garbage, wasn’t funny since this is an hentai any way, it took from the what was supposed to be hot sex but the author needed to add some weird “we are eating cake with friends while we toe fuck one another”

not sure why you're implying hentai can't be funny

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

imagine being surrounded by endless negativity and false attitudes and the one person you had measured yourself against just moves on to a better life

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

fin? is it done?

joined Feb 22, 2023

this was cute. i could go for another chapter of this

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

"like we'd ever fight" are you dumb? i hope yall break up within a year

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

they got yuri at denny's?

joined Feb 22, 2023

might wanna re-order chapter 15

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

oh yeah i definitely wouldnt have noticed the hairpin thing just reading these update to update. very cool

joined Feb 22, 2023

its funny how the comments for this chapter are cold just like the comments within the chapter itself

GreenGallant
joined Feb 22, 2023

OUGH

joined Feb 22, 2023

is anyone else seeing this