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Image Comments 16 Feb 17:21
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joined Nov 18, 2019
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Nurse position, it's being a while since i see this one

Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

Really hardcore this chap...kinda realistic thought

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Image Comments 15 Feb 20:31
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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Sexyyyyy

Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

AND THEY KISS¡¡¡¡¡¡

Alphabus
Image Comments 06 Feb 23:05
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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BOOOOOOOM¡

Alphabus
Image Comments 06 Feb 23:01
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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Ok i love dad jokes but i don't understand this

Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

How much weed you need to smoke to think in a plot like this one?

Alphabus
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

This is like a dream come true, JALTER IS CUTE

Alphabus
Image Comments 29 Jan 20:59
Zzzz
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Breast feeding XDD

Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

If this was a oneshot that might develop into a full series, it would be excellent, but as a self-contained entry in an anthology, it feels rather lacking. The political manoeuvring was interesting by otome villainess story standards (although that is an extremely low bar), but I felt zero emotional connect to anyone involved. It feels like a classic example of telling over showing- we're told that there's a good relationship between the two leads and shown a panel of them with lilies in the background, and we're told that the duchess plays the part of a villain while a montage runs in the background, but nothing ever seems to happen in real time apart from dreary exposition dumps about the politics of a place we know basically nothing about. I'd get it if it was your standard chapter one infodump that gives readers context so that the rest of the story can flow, but as a complete story in itself, it just feels like a chore to read, a promise for what might be a compelling tale delivered by a dispassionate voiceover. All in all, it suffers from the exact same problem that every other story in this anthology has- a desire to stuff a complex narrative into forty pages by prioritizing generic otome political babble over any actual emotional depth. This doesn't feel like an anthology of tales so much as a compilation of recap episodes for series that never actually existed.

Is a one shot that is way too short to be judge as a whole, again, way too short, still good tho.

Alphabus
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019

Too pure for this world, SSSLLLLOOOOWWWWW BUUUUURRRRRNNNNN intensifies

Alphabus
Image Comments 19 Jan 20:30
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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PFFFFHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAAHAH

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Image Comments 19 Jan 20:28
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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XD Riko loves yuri hahahahahahaah still need find the image of her reading yuri tho

Alphabus
Image Comments 15 Jan 21:52
Zzzz
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Looooooool

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Image Comments 15 Jan 21:51
Zzzz
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Cute af

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Image Comments 15 Jan 21:50
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Awwwwwwwwwww

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Image Comments 15 Jan 21:48
Zzzz
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Lol, that sempai got a friend w benefits nor a gf in secret

Alphabus
Image Comments 15 Jan 21:46
Zzzz
joined Nov 18, 2019
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This deserves a whole manga series

Alphabus
Image Comments 11 Jan 22:12
Zzzz
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Awwwwwwwwwwww

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:11
Zzzz
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Yuri cupid at work¡

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:10
Zzzz
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:09
Zzzz
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Ideas of how they coupling up?

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:08
Zzzz
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Inner desires split out

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:07
Zzzz
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Queen of tsunderes

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Image Comments 11 Jan 22:06
Zzzz
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AHHHHHH the well comunication of marriage